The Long Road Home, Ch. 4

Apr 13, 2010 14:25

I figure there is no point to still post the summary, because I've posted enough by now that you already know if you want to read it or not. :D

Thanks as always for your support and comments. <3

CHAPTER 4

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i_luv_booth April 13 2010, 19:37:27 UTC
this was heartbreaking, but I'm glad Uther's made to feel a bit awkward - he deserved it! look forward to reading more :) x

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a_boleyn1230 April 13 2010, 23:09:31 UTC
Thanks for hanging in there with me and reading! :D It was a little slow here but I promise good stuff is ahead for ArMor!

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pizzazzical April 13 2010, 21:30:23 UTC
Lol, if they really did think that A/Mor were siblings, isn't it clear as day that Ygraine had an affair somewhere down the line? Cause Morgana looks nothing like Arthur :P

Anyway, back to seriousness. Your fic really cheered me up on a really, really crap day. And Tavis is the most inappropriate ambassador ever! If Uther hadn't been there Arthur would have his head on a pike. I can't wait for all the action to begin :3 I want Morgana to secretly kick major ass (untying all the horses, insisting they camp on muddy ground), I can't stand the idea of her marrying that old king! T_T

Post more? :)

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a_boleyn1230 April 13 2010, 23:22:05 UTC
It's the argument that totally grates on my nerves! People who are intimidated by the chemistry and worried it will mess up A/G say that Arthur and Morgana are like brother and sister make me wonder... what exactly is their ownrelationship with siblings like?! LOL Because no guy looks at his sister like that, or says, "God have mercy!".

Sorry about your crappy day! :-/ But happy a fic can bring cheer! I can promise kick!ass in the future, though it may not be where/when the reader expects. ;)

I imagined Tavis in my mind a bit like the ambassador Chapuys in The Tudors... only slimier. I love coming up with original characters and making them "play" with canon characters. It's like Barbie for fangirls!

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luckytohaveher April 14 2010, 06:36:11 UTC
Lovely new chapter! I kinda want to punch Tavis in the throat and I'm so glad we're finally seeing Arthur react a bit, I'm secretly hoping AMor get caught in a compromising position during the trip. Even if they go to war...

I think Morgana is taking the situation in a very passive manner, which doesn't seem like her at all. I would love to see her EXPLODE with anger/frustration at some point. We all know she's a pistol.

To think of Hunchback/Morgana is still gross. I really don't want to read about them "breeding" ugh. My kingdom for a happy ending!

-Arthur and Morgana score some alone time.
-Preparations for leaving Camelot.
-The journey begins (camping out!)

I'M SO EXCITED ABOUT THIS. ALSO I'M HOPING FOR SOME SEXYTIEMS DURING THE CAMPING TRIP.

Also you get brownie points for mocking the "OMG AMOR ARE LIKE BROTHER AND SISTER" comments from certain parts of the fandom. Obviously the whole "God have mercy thing" was just Arthur asking God to have mercy on his LOVERSISTER for wearing such a revealing and sinful dress.

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a_boleyn1230 April 14 2010, 22:24:40 UTC
Hi! :) The next chapter is pretty explosive, actually, on multiple fronts. I'm trying to write Morgana truthfully, but also impart the sense of duty on them both. I have to, in order to get where I am going with it. This is a hard fic to post, because sometimes I just want to upload the whole thing - I'd excited to share the "later" parts. :)

Also you get brownie points for mocking the "OMG AMOR ARE LIKE BROTHER AND SISTER" comments from certain parts of the fandom

It's SO off base! If someone comes to that conclusion, I can only assume they have very odd relationships with their own siblings. :-0

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luckytohaveher April 15 2010, 18:55:37 UTC
I can only assume they have very odd relationships with their own siblings. :-0

IKR! My mom adopted my cousin when he was a toddler and he's by all means and purposes my brother and whenever I wear something revealing he usually goes "OMG COVER YOURSELF UP OR I'M TELLING MOM YOU LOOK LIKE SKANK" not "God have mercy!" Seriously, do they know nothing about how sibling relationships work? LOL.

*waits patiently for next chapter*

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canon_balls April 15 2010, 03:35:30 UTC
Take THAT A/G shippers! Seriously, people married their sisters in ancient Egypt, on purpose! LOL! They got nothin' with this argument! ;D

Yea, Capps must have some sister issues, 'cause Season 1 was in no way a familial relationship.

You know, I thought Morgana was very strong in this chapter. How much stronger do you have to be to reign in your temper and temperament to do your duty than to do what you want? At the same time, I am so sad. This is how I feel reading canon, because I know that even tho they love each other, they aren't going to be together.....BUT I know that you hate canon as much as I do, so I'm not really sad, 'cause I know you will have a happy ArMor 'shipper ending. I'm just gonna enjoy the angst!!

Anxiously awaiting chapter 5.....and some tongue action -- LOL!!

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a_boleyn1230 April 15 2010, 18:07:01 UTC
Take THAT A/G shippers! Seriously, people married their sisters in ancient Egypt, on purpose!

LOL, I know right? The recently discovered that King Tut's father was his uncle, too. [Which reminds me, I love your cat's name] Ward does not equal sibling.

You know, I thought Morgana was very strong in this chapter

Thankyouthankyouthankyou for understanding. It's not that I am trying to make her appear weak or unmotivated, but she understands the consequences. What happens now leads to the good stuff later on. ;)

Your wish for tongue action is granted.

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morganaobsessed July 4 2010, 05:57:20 UTC
Good job on mocking the sister/brother comment. They are NOT sisterly and brotherly!!!!!! Have people even seen season one?????? If they wanted them to be siblings they should have just made them half siblings, not made Morgana Uther's ward. Thanks for the mocking, it made me laugh!

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