The Long Road Home, Chs. 5 & 6

Apr 15, 2010 13:42

Two new chapters!

Chapter 5 )

fic, arthur/morgana, the long road home

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i_luv_booth April 15 2010, 19:46:25 UTC
oh god, when will the sad bits end, and the happy bits start? :) amazing, cant wait to see what happens on the journey, and I both laughed and felt sick at "We meet the old king who makes even Gaius look sexy" lol x

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a_boleyn1230 April 16 2010, 02:09:51 UTC
Well, the next post will have humor and some warm fuzzies, then comes a sad part, then the really good stuff comes. :) Almost there! I'm getting excited to get to it, with some surprises throw in.

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hynotic_n_crazy April 15 2010, 23:51:39 UTC
BO that wasn't armor sex it was armor foreplay and that's not cool to get them both heated and then turn the hose on! it wasn't cave!sex either (sad face)
arthur and morgana can get married without stupid priests yanno! omg this is just torture i both love it to death and hate it so that i'm glad it died from my love! lol there's too much sadness! i want goodness (and cave!sex) mostly goodness... but a lot of cave!sex!
i bet giaus resents that jibe tho!
more more?

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a_boleyn1230 April 16 2010, 02:06:02 UTC
Liza! We've been wondering where you were on the FF thread.
I knew you would take me to task for the unsatisfying almost-sex scene. :P
You know, when I was writing this I had no idea it would be torturous to the reader! I know it's sad, but good things come to those who wait. Next chapters will have humor and warm fuzzies, not so bad. A sad fic with the promise of a happy ending is better than watching S2 and A/G, isn't it?! LOL

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hynotic_n_crazy April 16 2010, 09:39:42 UTC
BO! if you knew it would happen why did you let it? y???? humour and warm fuzzies? GIMME GIMME GIMME! no i mean it... give it! NOW! please?
and yes, a million thousand billion trillion times yes!

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luckytohaveher April 16 2010, 12:24:27 UTC
-The journey to, and arrival in, Gleanntan.
-We meet the old king who makes even Gaius look sexy.

I am afraid.

So here's what I thought of the actual chapters!

I want to punch Uther in the face. Repeatedly. With bronze knuckles.

I want to punch Arthur in the face too (STOP IT WITH THE EMO AND DO SOMETHING, KILL UTHER OR WHATEVER IDK. YOU CAN STOP THE SHIT FROM HITTING THE FAN IF YOU WANT TO!)

I love Merlin.

I want to hug Kian, I really hope he *is* good and has no ulterior motives.

I miss this Gwen, I love this Gwen.

Also, as for the "herbs" um, that's a huge loophole for her and Arthur. She can always say that her maidenhood was lost while horseback riding, which was not uncommon back then. I just hate that her first time will be with this supposedly generous King who wants to keep her alone at his palace as a trophy wife and is a hunchback. Morgana is going to die if he takes Gwen away from her! So unfair.

Heartbreaking. Please continue soon!

*waits for new chapter*

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a_boleyn1230 April 16 2010, 12:41:27 UTC
I'm glad that you are experiencing the range of emotions I was trying to put into this fic - I'm an emo!whore, and wanted this fic to be multi-dimensional. Frustration, anger, sadness, joy, excitement, suspense, victory!

Oh, Kian is totally innocent, I just wanted to create a Gleanntan version of Merlin, someone cute and cuddly and supportive of Morgana. We learn more about him the next few chapters.

I just hate that her first time will be with this supposedly generous King

I never said that...

Arthur is not worried. See?
http://www.flickr.com/photos/yavannauk/4523634335/in/set-72157623862426042/

Arthur is chill.

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pizzazzical April 17 2010, 20:31:49 UTC
*wails*

*stops abruptly after reading above comment*

So... A/Mor sex is definitely happening? :D Damn you Arthur for chilling!! If it werent for the fact that A) you pull the most improbable and hilarious battle faces B) you actually shave your beard and C) your face is ridiculously handsome, I'd be very, very mad at you. *frowns*

That said: dude, Uther makes Romans look nice. I hope Morgana and Arthur teach him a lesson or two one of these days :O

Please post more!!! I need to know what happens! And see the A?Mor sex with my own eyes

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a_boleyn1230 April 18 2010, 02:02:54 UTC
you pull the most improbable and hilarious battle faces

He really does! It's so funny when he puffs out his cheeks and purses his lips like a fish.

In the process of updating right now. :)

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canon_balls April 19 2010, 02:51:22 UTC
Ack!! So glad I waited to read this when I know I have two more posted chappies to read!! ;D I can get right to it. Kinda like watching an ep on dvr, I can skip the commercials and get right back to it -- lol!!

Uther.....may you be tied to a stake in the desert, and eaten by a million fire ants......

(and an "awwwww" moment -- his mother's ring. Awwww)

If she has to keep Delia in the stables, I will cut a Tormod.

off to read more!

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