The Long Road Home, Ch. 12

Apr 25, 2010 11:08

Apologies for the delay - silly RL gets in the way!

Warnings: excess sap and sexual situations

Chapter 12... )

fic, the long road home

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i_luv_booth April 25 2010, 16:56:09 UTC
this was great, it was lovely to see Merlin and Gwen at the wedding, that they were the only people Morgana and Arthur really wanted there. I'm looking forward to Uther's reaction when he finds out they're married! x

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a_boleyn1230 April 26 2010, 19:24:04 UTC
Thank you! I know, I miss S1 Gwen and Merlin used to be a good friend to Morgana, I just wanted to return to that for this fic. <3

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neda16 April 26 2010, 02:38:33 UTC
Yay ArMor wedding! My dream came true :D *hugs* Thank you Bo for providing me with ArMor marriage fluff ♥ My shipper heart is very happy. I'm so glad they got married! And it was sweet that Merlin and Gwen got to be there, I like this Gwen haha. I want this Gwen back on the show! I can't wait to see Uther's reaction! I want Morgana to show him up so badly for what he did to her!

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a_boleyn1230 April 26 2010, 19:27:16 UTC
Neda I'm so happy this made you happy! :D I want to cheer up my fellow ArMor shippers - the war isn't over! Fluff is good for the shipper's soul. Maybe we should make a "Missing" poster for S1 Gwen, like the one I am going to make for S1 Arthur! lol

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canon_balls April 26 2010, 03:30:28 UTC
*le sigh*

I'm all happy, and dreamy, and floaty now....

I love that they just got married, and now Uther can stick it in his royal pipe and smoke it.

And I'm sure we haven't seen the last of Kian....will Merlin be jealous? Or will he have a new boyfriend? LMAO!

Loved this:
“You do realize this is forever, don’t you?” she asked him as they pulled apart.

Arthur nodded, grimacing. “Heaven help me,” he said as he gazed upward, a reply which earned him a sharp jab in the ribs.

And the end was lovely. No smut needed, that was a scene that fit the tone of your fic.

Nice job, my dear! This is such an awesome story! Bring on chapter 13!

(just one typo to go in and fix "That was wear the ring belonged." needs to be "where." pesky spell check! ;)

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a_boleyn1230 April 26 2010, 19:23:08 UTC
Thank you, muffin, I have corrected it. I usually do a read-through of each chapter 3 times, but stuff still clips through my swiss cheese brain.

Dreamy and floaty... are you smoking weed again?

LMAO at the idea of the new ship, Kirlin!

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luckytohaveher April 26 2010, 07:47:19 UTC
By the goddess, this was perfect!

The wedding was beautiful and the wedding night was amazing. I really like your smut, it's good to read about the feelings instead of IKEA erotica in a fic such as this. I dont think an overly descriptive sex scene would have fit with the rest.

I was so sad to leave Kian behind but he is a seer and he told Morgana they'd meet again so not all hope is lost!

And now, Uther... I hope he doesn't kill them or die from shock when he hears the news. Morgana and Arthur might get a reputation of going around giving Kings heart-attacks.

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a_boleyn1230 April 27 2010, 03:10:17 UTC
Thanks M, glad you enjoyed! All along I have been so anxious to post this chapter. LOL I never thought of the connection between kings and heart attacks. Uther is a healthy man though. ;)

Oh, I don't believe I could write step-by-step smut. Not that I don't enjoy reading that

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luckytohaveher April 27 2010, 22:55:20 UTC
Oh, I don't believe I could write step-by-step smut. Not that I don't enjoy reading that

Bo, I agree 100%, it's just that the way you wrote this fit with the fact that it was their first time. Sometimes authors are a bit unrealistic about first-time sex, yet I got that it was perfect for Morgana because it was Arthur, even if it was a bit painful.

Also, sometimes when reading there are thing you don't want to know right. I had the misfortune of running into a very bad euphemism recently... and you know, if your lover has a giant purple dragon of love instead of a penis, he might want to see a doctor.

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a_boleyn1230 April 28 2010, 02:47:31 UTC
giant purple dragon of love instead of a penis

I think I just ruptured my spleen laughing at that. Maybe Gaius can come up with a remedy?!

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hynotic_n_crazy April 26 2010, 09:47:23 UTC
BO! omg this is so freakin awesome! you know i'm basically squealing with happiness right now right? this the the perfect cure for the flu!
but you know i disagree with the poster above there is NEVER a place armor!sex smut fic would not fit! lol but this was amazing perfect!
i'm perfectly content to go get my high on with cold medicine lol! more yes? more!
uther better be happy dady-in-law or i'll find him and make it so camelot has a new king! lol
love you bo!

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a_boleyn1230 April 27 2010, 03:08:12 UTC
I hope you are feeling better, Liza! We miss you at FF. :( Isabella started talking about Gaius "getting freaky" and now I am scared for my life! lol I have been excited to post this chapter and I KNEW you above all would love it, so I am happy I could bring some squees and smut to the ship.
Next chapter may involve a bath tub. ;)

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hynotic_n_crazy April 27 2010, 04:15:44 UTC
quit teasin me and just post it i want bathtub sex! (and omg i wish horseback sex could work but it might just be mean to the horse, lol i'm thinkin that must be y the rspca was invented... uyes to stop people giving horses dirty mind pictures! rotfl) i miss y'all on FF too but i'm house sitting so i don't want to be always on their internet i'll be home soon!
as long as isabella's not talking about getting freaky with cai then it's all good (SHE KNOWS HE'S MINE FOR KEEPSIES!!) lol
i'm getting better!

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a_boleyn1230 April 27 2010, 12:24:53 UTC
Maybe this will cheer you up. Look what our "hidden cameras" captured in the coat closet at the Pierrefonds hotel:

http://bradley-james.com/gallery/displayimage.php?album=118&pos=60

LOL I think it's just the lighting that makes Katie's hair look reddish. :P

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