[one-shot] Arashi; A dream is a wish (Your heart makes)

Jul 09, 2012 02:44

Fandom: Arashi
Title: A dream is a wish (Your heart makes)
Pairings: Matsumoto Jun x Sakurai Sho, Ninomiya Kazunari x Ohno Satoshi (of course, Aiba is also in it ^^)
Genre: AU, fantasy, angst, romance, some fluff (after all, it's a fairy tale...)
Rating: PG
Summary: "Have faith in your dreams and, someday, your rainbow will come smiling through."
Notes: ( Read more... )

f: arashi, ex: one-shot, g: romance, lan: english, g: fantasy, g: fluff, g: angst, g: au, p: ohmiya, p: sakumoto

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tsunderellasays July 10 2012, 04:02:40 UTC


HERE. HAVE MY HEART. TAKE IT.

(I promise to write a proper comment later because I still can't stop sdjfhgdhgfjdghjfd-ing.)

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ayu_t July 10 2012, 05:07:45 UTC
*glomps* I swear this must be kind of a sign, cause I was just thinking of going and reading some of your fics now that I'm in a fic reading mood o.O (I've read some of them already and liked them a lot, but I usually get too shy to write comments D:)

No, but really *grabs heart* ♥ I'll be waiting to read that proper comment ^^

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tsunderellasays July 12 2012, 08:37:20 UTC
Ohai, I've finally thought of a coherent comment. (That took awhile, haha.)

I love the story. Cinderella is one of my favorite classic Disney princess movies, and I'm so glad this is as fluffy as the original (if not fluffier). Mice!Ohmiya is equally cute, and I was totally expecting Aiba to be the baka fairy godfather. Hee. ♥

But I liked the ending the most. I was actually expecting Jun to marry Sho and live in the castle happily ever after, but the ending was just right. In a good way. It's like expected of Sakumoto to end up that way and still be happy together.

Thank you! It's a really cute fic. Ever think of writing other princess-related fics? ;) ♥

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ayu_t July 15 2012, 23:16:10 UTC
Don't worry, as you see it took me a while to reply as well xD ( ... )

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kaklong_kenji July 10 2012, 06:05:18 UTC
i love this!<3 i can't help imagining jun twirl around and sing with the birds XD LOL.. and ohmiya lost their cloths..something happen right? right?XP.. actually i love reading fic while listening some music, it give more feelings~ the background music surely nice, somehow on 2nd music i can't stop laughing because somehow it match perfectly with fairy godfather aiba!XDXD.. well, i don't mind to have arashi's Disney never ending story from you~*wink*wink thanks dear for wonderful fairy tale<3

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ayu_t July 15 2012, 22:45:10 UTC
(Sorry for replying this late D:)

Thank you! ♥ Haha, I did imagine him like that too, but I decided to leave that part to the readers' imagination XD

Oh, and of course something happened with Ohmiya *wink*

I'm glad you liked the music as well :) I usually need to listen to music while I write, and this time I thought it would be good to share it, since it's so directly related to the storyline :D

You're very welcome! I don't have any more ideas like this for the moment, but if I do I'll write it for sure ^^

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astrangerenters July 11 2012, 04:11:00 UTC
Ah, I saw this story and thought "Ohmiya are pretty much Gus Gus and Jacques in human form" and what do you know? I get Ohmiya as Gus Gus and Jacques LOL too cute :)

I like the change in the end with Sho giving up his throne for the person he loves :)

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ayu_t July 15 2012, 22:54:05 UTC
Awww, it was a good idea then ;) At first I wasn't sure about what to do with them, though, but when I started writing they just popped out there :D

Ah, the ending part ♥ I wanted to make both Cinderella/Jun and the Prince more independent characters, so I decided a big change for the Prince as well would be nice ^^

Thank you very much for reading and for your comment ♥ Like last time, I appreciate it a lot and I'm very happy to know you liked my story ;D

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neko_kirin3104 January 8 2013, 21:24:55 UTC
Oh, so sweet! And I liked the way it ended, too. It sure made the story more believable despite the fact that it was based on a fairy tale. And Ohmiya as two little mice is just chou kawaii!!!

I also have to commend how you've kept the boys in character, despite them playing different roles from the norm. I loved this particular line: Nino ignored him and wrapped his arms around Ohno, who was busy trying his new nose. It was sweet and funny, and I bet not very far from the truth. And Aiba as clumsy fairy godfather is ♥ Somehow I knew, even before I started reading that he was bound to be the one doing some clumsy magic.

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ayu_t January 20 2013, 01:28:06 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥ I had a really good time writing this :D

Thank you ^^ I guess I'm just so used to watch them interacting that I just can't imagine it otherwise.

And of course such a role could only be played by Aiba! Haha! :)

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