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a_lil_nothing

Fic: We Build Bridges (7&8/10)

Jun 28, 2009 00:28

Chapter 7:

A boisterous and impromptu after party at their house ended up with a bunch of coppers breaking it up, citing neighborhood noise ordinances or something to that effect (which was ten times better than arresting everyone for public intoxication and/or use of illegal substances). By that time Gina and Kieran were surprisingly already in ( Read more... )

we build bridges 7 & 8, what i wouldn't give for a mallorca, fan fiction

Comments 7

theatrebob1 June 28 2009, 08:14:35 UTC

MOARRR PLEASSE
and soooooon

a_lil_nothing June 28 2009, 22:30:54 UTC

soon, sweetie! i'm done with the epilogue and will post tonight. yay! =)

theatrebob1 June 28 2009, 23:22:31 UTC

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY goot.

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thank you =) a_lil_nothing June 28 2009, 22:32:57 UTC

posting the rest tonight so not too long of a wait. i like having most of the fic finished before posting 'cause i'm so impatient and hate making anyone wait for updates. lol.

puffy_wuffy June 28 2009, 20:34:53 UTC

Your chapters, they are epically long! I devoured everything at a quick pace, but it still took me two days. It's been amazing so far, and I'm excited for the last bits. GIMME GIMME

I am, first and foremost, a Naomily shipper, but I also have deep love for Tommo/Panda, and the conversation between Naomi and Thomas is MIND MELTINGLY AWESOME.

a_lil_nothing June 28 2009, 22:39:38 UTC

yeah, my chapters are long in this fic, aren't they? and they're, like, not even detailed or anything (not like other writers that have amazing narrative). lol. i'm more of a dialogue person. i like Panda but i LOVE, LOVE thomas. dont know why really since we hardly even know him. i'm glad to hear you liked the convo btn n/t, he's really the only one i could think of for this part.

puffy_wuffy June 28 2009, 23:48:44 UTC

I'm actually more of a dialogue person myself. I like to leave exposition up to the mind of the reader more, its probably why I love your fic so much.

Thomas is a fantastic character, I think. I feel sad that he didn't get more time, considering that he seems like such a generous and open-minded friend.