Hold On As Long As You Can

Sep 13, 2010 23:30

Title: Hold On As Long As You Can ( Read more... )

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epicflailer September 14 2010, 07:01:51 UTC
UH I JUST ABOUT CHOKED ON MY EXCITEMENT WHEN I SAW YOU'D FILLED THIS. HOW ARE YOU SO SPEEDY?

BRB WILL BE BACK WITH MORE COHERENT FB ONCE I'VE ACTUALLY READ IT.

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a_loaded_die September 14 2010, 07:04:01 UTC
oh gawd I hope it's okay!

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epicflailer September 14 2010, 07:12:36 UTC
OH. OH, HEART.

OMG HOW FANTASTIC WAS THIS, I CANNOT EVEN--

THE WHUMPAGE. THE STOIC BADASSERY. ARTHUR HOLDING ON AS LONG AS HE COULD. COBB'S CONCERN. THE SCENE WHERE HE REALIZES ARTHUR IS HURT = MAGIC. YOU GOT DOWN EVERYTHING I ASKED FOR, TYSM.

I AM MAKING *_____________* FACES ALL OVER THE PLACE RN.

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a_loaded_die September 14 2010, 07:24:34 UTC
YAY! \o/

I'm SO glad you liked it! For some reason I was ridiculously nervous about this one! Also, your icon is AMAZING

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rei17 September 14 2010, 08:16:05 UTC
So much love. *___________*
Hurt!but stoic!Arthur and angry!worried!Cobb are totally my secret favorites. Awesome.
Please say you write more? ♥

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a_loaded_die September 14 2010, 16:46:55 UTC
haha I'm loving those *___* faces. Thank you so much! I'm planning on writing more and I gotta say, they're my favorites too. Angry!worried!Cobb is definitely someone I enjoy a lot.

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dreamlittleyo September 14 2010, 14:28:50 UTC
Oh, I Love this! Beautifully done!

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a_loaded_die September 14 2010, 16:47:05 UTC
thank you!

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coldthermistor September 14 2010, 14:54:25 UTC
I really enjoyed this! xD

“No. I can keep it together. You go finish the job.” When Cobb tries to protest Arthur takes a hold of his jaw firmly, or what he hopes is firmly. “Go finish the job, Dom, I’ll keep the dream going as long as I can.”

This was so in-character that it was lovely (:

“You were unconscious for two hours. A fucking Hollywood movie isn’t worth you risking yourself like that.” Cobb hisses out

The most in-character Cobb moment that I enjoyed (: Cobb always gets harsh and angry when he's worried ;)

Has to hold on as long as he can. Maybe a few minutes before he drowns. Hopes it’s enough time.

I love the way his thoughts slowly get short and shorter, as the wound really starts to take its toll on him. I could go on but I think you get the point, and I'd babble until it gets tl;dr (:

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a_loaded_die September 14 2010, 16:48:45 UTC
oh wow, thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. There are few compliments more dear to me than in character compliments so thank you so much. :)

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animegoil September 15 2010, 05:45:40 UTC
Mm, yeah, that was good. Felt natural.

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a_loaded_die September 15 2010, 17:48:28 UTC
Thank you!

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