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[a_lonely_scribe]

Breath pounding
Heart panting
And blood dripping

Her eyes glow bright
In the dim moonlight
Against the dingy walls
Hardly illuminates her face at all

Torn stockings
Ripped dress
And combat boots

Was it quite as you were expecting?
The hard anxious pull
As she bites her lip
It’s not beauty anymore…

This isn’t a fucking faerietale
Is it boy?
Not the one you

Comments

[anonymous]

Love the emotion, darling. You made me *feel*.

[a_lonely_scribe]

I am glad I could do that for you.

[anime_gal3]

well I must say the i liked the last stanza. i thought the 3rd line was a bit cliche or out of place. other than that nice. very nice.

[a_lonely_scribe]

thanks darlin'.

[anonymous]

(8) Sexypaaaants, sexypaaaaaants, soon you'll be weaaaaaaring my sexypaaaaaaants, not 'cause you're in miiiiiiine, but 'cause I gave them to youuuuuu, sexypaaaaaaaants, sexypaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaants!! (8)

[a_lonely_scribe]

i wish i was in your pants.

[anonymous]

You will be on the 23rd!

*hums to the tune of Sexypants*

[bornwylde]

wow...
that's....
wow.....

I don't know quite exactly what to think...
I like it!
...but it's...
i dunno.

I think I'm not gonna be able to describe accurately what I think.
I like it though.

[a_lonely_scribe]

It's sketch. It's completely crass.

Thanks though, even if you can't explain your thoughts.