[fic] some dance to remember (mabo/nagase)

[a_m_a_t_u_s]

Some Dance to Remember, a long-ago promised horror-themed MaboNaga fanfiction I started in March and only finished now. It's a murky kind of piece which is supposed to be kind of confusing. Honestly I wrote the porn first. But. Rated NC-17 for sex

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[gurajiorasu]

i hate you. because it's so good, I read it twice.
*runs to the lake*

[a_m_a_t_u_s]

CHRIST MAMA DONT FOLLOW IN MABOS EXAMPLE

[gurajiorasu]

I don't mind if that means there will be a Nagase Tomoya rescuing me.

[a_m_a_t_u_s]

OH MY GOD

I ALREADY STARTED PART 2? ?? ? HAH A hah AHa hahahAHA and there'll be arashi in it. sorta. kinda. i haven't worked out all the kinks but I BELIEVE--

[v6_tokiofangirl]

EFDGVHJNHYGFTRYVGBHJN

[a_m_a_t_u_s]

oh my goodness I don't even know how to reply to this wahhhhhhh I'm so glad????? that you like it whahthatwhtjhshtasghk

Writing the sex was actually kind of difficult--like they are both very very messed up people here and I just wanted to show that as best that i can??? SO YEAH, I DID PUT MORE EMPHASIS ON THEIR CHARACTERS THAN ANYTHING. like it's so dark and so upsetting, the things that happened to them, and I'm just hoping that it doesn't seem TOO ooc or anything???? *dies*

it's like they could've probably been in love if they weren't so fucked up. HGHGHGHHHGHGHG and we all know mabo wants to take care of tomoya ; A ; it's in his nature!!! he's actually a very nice guy!!!!! he's just too crazy. :))))

NAGASE IS REALLY STUPID... HE ALWAYS DOES STUPID THINGS. IT'S JUST THAT THIS STUPID THING THIS TIME IS SEX?????? hehheheehehh his daughter has a bigger part later ♥

I'VE ALREADY STARTED THE SEQUEL.... BUT I DON'T KNOW HOW LONG I'LL TAKE FOR IT HHHFHFHGFHG

[v6_tokiofangirl]

YES YOU SHOULD SO BE A PROFESSIONAL FANFIC WRITER OR SOMETHING THESE CHARACTERISATIONS ARE SO AOIUGSDKMASDOGJLKSDAOGJLK
YESSSSSSS if only they weren't messed up they might be together!!! *clutches heart in despair*
Oh yesssss I'm so looking forward to the sequel! *squeals*

I'm also going to reply to your reply in your other fic here.
OIWALKDMFOALMDSAOUDSJF YES YES YES if you have time, it's OK if you don't want to, I would loveee to see a drawing of Mabo kissing Nagase in a kimono><
AMFSOIDGJKMADSGAKDS
Just imagining it is making me squeal.
LOL yes is it even possible to draw samurai armour?

IKR!!!!!!!
DASH does not have enough Twin Towers (or maybe it's us who can't get enough Twin Towers lol)!! It's so weird how it seems Mabo never appears in 0 yen Cafeteria, if he did that more often we could see more cute cooking with Mabo scenes (esp. with Tomoya of course<3

[a_m_a_t_u_s]

You are literally the cutest AHHHHHH i'm so inspired to continue it now because of you damn it Ann

I WILL TOTALLY TRY TO DRAW IT.... I DON'T KNOW HOW GOOD I WILL BE AT DRAWING KIMONO, BUT I WILL TRY IT....... and then ill show you eeeeeee ;sdj;lnd;glm I don't think it's possible to draw armour. Maybe I'll just photoshop it

(It's probably us who can't get enough Twin Towers really) YES THOUGH??? MABO IS SUCH A GOOD COOK SO IT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE THAT HE DOESN'T GET TO COOK I'm still so not over how impressed he was over Tomoya's chopping please kill me
ALSO DO TAKE YOUR TIME WITH THE TRANSLATIONS IT'S REALLY FINE ; V ; Would you like me to edit them again? Also you can just e-mail me instead of PMing me here~~~~~~

WAHHHHHHHHH ARE YOU GOING SOMEWHERE FAR AWAY FOR HOLIDAY???

[im_toma]

*BURNS IN HELL READING THIS AND LIKING IT*