The Simple Art of Breathing

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Title: The Simple Art of Breathing
Rating: PG
Pairing: Bella Swan/Carlisle Cullen
Disclaimer: Fiction. I own nothing.
Summary: Two clandestine lovers share a single kiss.
Author's Note: This is my first Twilight fanfic. It's quite short, but I think the message is conveyed despite its length. Written in 2nd person.

Comments

[icegirl99]

Beautiful. There are simply no other words for what you have written. I adored this.

[jellybabie_331]

It's great. Amazing imagery, I loved it.

[dream_inspired]

Absolutely breath-taking, my dear. The imagery is beautiful. You choose your words very well for maximum impact in such a short story. Loved it!

[xsteadyxboysx]

Beautiful. I like the chaste ideal, but it seethes with so much anticipation. I adore it.

"And like his illicit lover you return his kiss with one of your own."

My darling...it could get so much more dirty, haha.

[burnlikepetals]

wow, this is amazing.