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Jan 26, 2006 16:23


 Decided to post a poem by no other than myself =) not the best in the world, its okay i suppose it serves its purpose to me and for who it is for, any suggestions?

The drunk

Combustable material plants itself

To all my confusion

As my quivering fingers meet

My quivering lips

My head swivels into

The painted guilt

That salts my wounds

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anonymous July 26 2005, 21:41:21 UTC
that's a very good poem!
keep on writting!

Love Jordan!

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_beautyforashes July 27 2005, 19:52:53 UTC
i was in a car accident. i tried calling you, but your phone number wasnt working. and i tried calling kara too, that didnt work either. call me though. =].

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anonymous July 28 2005, 19:09:23 UTC
You have amazing skill baby. I love you so much!! =]

Tom!

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