(one-shot) make you fly

[a_soft_embrace]

Title: Make You Fly
Author: fingeredheart
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Angst, friendship, romance.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer(s): I own nothing.
Summary: (Three superpowers to make you fly, three abilities to make somebody like Jonghyun fall in love with somebody like you.)
A/N: A remix of scarletpeonies's drabble butterfly, for the JongKey fanfiction remix. Expanded on the plot /

Comments

[dongbangsuju20]

SPOT

omg I love your fics <33
reading now~~

[fingeredheart]

♥

[dongbangsuju20]

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you make me feel all going warm and fluffy and ashjgf OMG
I MISSED YOU
(though maybe you don't even know who I am because I am so lazy and bad in writing comments and idk sorry?! TT)

but OMG jsdkhflh T_T
I MISSED YOU~

and nooow, the fic:

first I thought it would be angsty and drama and all and just friendship, because idk, the feeling was like this >.< but wouldn't be too bad, haha. but it's all fluffy lovely jongkey in the end and I love it as a whole.

(i love every word, every sentence and every paragraph but I will try to pick a bit out to quote <3)

(You are not Almighty in front of him, you never are.)

i love it how Jjong is always there to support and help Key. it's like he always knows what Key needs and then gives it to him. and Key can show his true face to him, he is not scared to show his weakness ♥
it makes me heart ache to read how Key is suffering and all .-. but then Jjong comes and everything is a bit better.. <3~

I love you, he whispers in your ear, and you are still crying so hard

[fingeredheart]

Oh, wow. *_________* thank you so much for such a lovely comment. I love it when people quote things back at me; it helps me learn how to improve my writing, so thank you ♥ and haha, no, I do remember you! Thanks for always being so supportive. :) it's nice to hear I've been missed

[jecca_o9]

I. god. coherency. I love this. You expanded on my favorite part of the drabble (i call you butterfly and Jonghyun stealing a kiss), and the whole Key catching Jonghyun stealing a kiss part is perfect--how Key feigns confidence when his sweaty hands betray him, and the awkwardness after he got sick, and Jonghyun banking on Key's competitiveness to get him through their show, and just. ♥♥♥

[fingeredheart]

Yay, I'm glad you liked it :DD (and that was my favorite part too, lol ♥ it's such a cute image). I was bit worried because it's been a while since I wrote JongKey and I was like "shit, this is totally OOC" so I'm extremely thrilled you enjoyed all those little things :) thank you so much!

[ontokki]

YOUUUUU FICCCCCCCC OMG. BRB

[ontokki]

;___________; omg Jen, you know much I miss your Jongkey fics. And you know that I love every single one of them. But I think this is my favorite one. This is so amazing, especially when Jonghyun steals the kiss and Key's awake. /mems just like all your other fics
♥

[fingeredheart]

Thanks, bb ;) it's nice to hear I've been missed! You flatter me so. ♥ Thank you so, so much for the lovely comment and mem, Luxi! :D

[r_hr_maniac]

very. very good. I kind of started crying at the end. My mental state might have something to do with it, but I think your writing skills might be a bit at fault too ♥ It's all very realistic. Built on the truth. It kind of reminded me of that time, when they recieved an award, Key was totaly out of it, Jonghyun was taking care of him, but Onew hugged Key too...when he let him go, though, Kibum turned around to Jjong and...it kind of looked as if he just waited for Jonghyun to pull him in. And I see this in the story. And love it ♥

[fingeredheart]

Thank you ♥! Aw, I'm sorry to hear that. I mean, I'm glad I could evoke emotion, but I'm not a fan of making people cry, haha. Also, I hope you're feeling better, whatever it was ): and I'm happy you thought it was realistic! I'm still pretty amateur to writing SHINee/JongKey, so I feel like I'm still adapting my writing style to their characters, and it always pleases me to hear that they seem realistic :) I think I do remember that, and it was really sweet ♥ everything they do for/with each other is so damn sweet. Thanks again! :D

[siaht]

I'm kinda dazed now, maybe it's not the right moment to leave a comment, but

The happiness Key felt in the end, I feel it inside me right now.

[fingeredheart]

That's a good thing, haha :DD! Thank you so much. ♥