(multi-chapter) second chances - chapter four

[a_soft_embrace]

Title: Second Chances
Author: fingeredheart
Pairing: Akame, Kame x OC (friendship), Pin (friendship), hint of Kame x Yamapi (past)
Genre: Romance, friendship, angst, drama, AU
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer(s): Nothing's mine except the plot.
Summary: “Because,” Kame breathes out, face pale, lips drawing together into a line (he suddenly looks tired, Jin thinks, washed

Comments

[jaimsterr]

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Thanks for the speedy updates. Hope you feel better soon :)

Ah, so a lot of things were revealed in this chapter. Really love it so far :D :D
I also love your Kame. He's different from how most authors usually write him. It's a nice change :3
Haha, thanks again.

[fingeredheart]

Haha, I'm glad you like the speed. :) Thank you!

Yeah, hopefully it clears things up a bit. I didn't want to prolong the suspense any longer than necessary. Also, I'm really happy to hear that :3 I tend to think of Kame as a headstrong, blunt person, so I was hoping that view of him would come across in here.

Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

[kawaiikame]

Awwwww the last part was too sweet!!
I love it ^^

[fingeredheart]

I'm glad you like how they're developing ;) I was afraid it might be a bit too quick, haha.

Thank you!

[kawaiikame]

Not at all! more fluff more fun :D
lol

[kamechanluva]

After I read this, it's like I'm at peace, a tranquility has been reached... that put all my suspense at rest. That is until I think, maybe...just maybe, this is the calm before the storm. And then I'm like what else does she have in store for these two.
Anyways, thank you:D and hope you feel better soon.

[fingeredheart]

I'm...hoping that's a good thing? :D don't worry, I'm not going to put them through too much, haha, seeing I also have to focus on the ~romantic~ part of the story ;)

Thank you! For the well wishes as well as the comment. ♥

[baybeshyne]

wow an update already, i was just thinking how long i was going to be in suspense...although i believe im going to be reveling in that feeling until the end of this fic! and thats what i LOVE about it!
sorry that this is the first time ive had to comment, so im going to make it 4 entries worth..lol

up until now, thank you for clearing up the question of kame's stepmother to be the one who called him, and linking the akamepi relationship from the beginning, and knowing the past jin and kame shared, is really building up the suspense of whats to come between them.

I do hope that kame and pi can fix their relationship, cuz i love it when pi is jins best friend, but is overprotective of kame the most!

we can already see the developing feelings of kame and jin...just gotta wait and see where you take us next....

ps. btw kame is so stubborn!! but stubborn kame is the BEST!

thank you so much for sharing and for the quick updates!

[fingeredheart]

I'm trying to update this as quickly as possible, so I'm glad you're enjoying it ;) and it's okay! Thanks a lot for taking the time to comment now. ♥

Haha, yeah, a lot of people were confused about that part, so I hope this chapter made things clearer. I think for the most part, the obstacles they've got left to tackle are mainly comprised of Jin's father, Kame's remorse in regards to his own father, and...Yamapi. :)

Happy you like stubborn Kame! It's sort of how I imagine him to be irl sometimes :B thank you for reading and commenting! :D

[silvertwinster]

YOU are awesome for updating so quickly 8DD

Jin and Kame are so squish-able in this ♥ I loved the part where Jin tricks Kame :3