(multi-chapter) second chances - chapter six

Nov 28, 2009 23:22

Title: Second Chances
Author: fingeredheart
Pairing: Akame, Kame x OC (friendship), Pin (friendship), hint of Kame x Yamapi (past)
Genre: Romance, friendship, angst, drama, AU
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer(s): Nothing's mine except the plot.
Summary: “Because,” Kame breathes out, face pale, lips drawing together into a line (he suddenly looks tired, Jin thinks, ( Read more... )

fic: second chances, pairing: akame, #multi-chapter

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wooden_buttons November 29 2009, 04:44:23 UTC
Deteriorating? Are you kidding me, Jen? PFFFFFT. Deteriorating, my ass.

Carefully, Jin offers a smile, reaching into himself and pulling out the most genuine upside down rainbow he can get.

FLAILSQUEE. Upside down rainbow, that seems to be the perfect description of Jin's smiles *_____*

“Jin,” he says, tastes the familiar name in his mouth, the rounded, gentle sweep of his tongue in his affection for this person whom is like his own brother. He can’t let it be like this. “You already have.”

OH YAMAPI T___T He's so prefect and wonderful and kind and heartbreaking ):

(He ignores the uncovering turmoil in his heart; the insistent voice that tells him what he wants is more than just a friendship.)

Kame and his denial ):

IF YOU KILL AKANISHI-SAN, I'LL HAVE TOTALLY PROVED MY POINT AJSHDKJS. You angsty person, you. ):

Please never stop writing ;___; ♥

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fingeredheart November 29 2009, 04:54:51 UTC
I SWEAR, RAI. REALLY. you know, I started this chapter like 5 days ago and stopped halfway, stared at what I'd written, and was so bummed about it I didn't feel like finishing until today )))':

I LIKED THE IDEA OF AN UPSIDE-DOWN RAINBOW. Like, with all the colors and everything. It'd be so Jin. The Jin that smiles and is happy. Like when he's with Pi. ♥

I like myself some angsty Yamapi, okay. :'D god I am such a sadist. They're all angsty in here. idk. I am an angsty child. We already know this. :|

Kame is the perfect victim of denial, imo. :)))) I have fun writing him in denial. sort of. AND WHO SAID AKANISHI-SAN WAS GOING TO DIE. Did I ever. hm. I actually haven't exactly decided yet...

ahaha are you sure you want to say that ;________; :x D:

...♥

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wooden_buttons November 29 2009, 05:05:21 UTC
PFFFT. You know what to do when you feel bummed about your writing? Go to the Akame comm and read some of the fics there ;DDD /shotshotshot/ N-not that all fics in the comm are bad...but some are really...motivating :DDD

askjhs IKR. They were so adorable on MS and in Pi's con T__T It was just too cute. Nnngh, BFFs for life T__T I used to totally blankface on Pin, but their friendship is just so pure and beautiful )):

I'M JUST SAYING THAT IF YOU MAKE HIM DIE THEN. THEN IT'S SAD AND I'LL PROBABLY CRY ): YOU DON'T WANT ME TO CRY, DO YOU JEN. ))))):

I am VERY sure ;DD I can take the angst for the prettiness of your writing ): AND THE OCCASIONAL FLUFF. FLUUUFF. And your AUs, I love your AUs *__*

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fingeredheart November 29 2009, 05:22:06 UTC
LOL OMG RAI YOU ARE SO MEAN. Honestly, I haven't ventured over there lately, so. idk. I'll take your implication as advice to stay where I am. :)

They're so cute sjkl;dfa ♥!!! Yeah, I used to be so :| towards both Pin and KamePi but now I'm getting "...*__*?" and ESPECIALLY PIN = *____________*! and. erm. ;; ♥ I love that they always make each other seem ~normal~ and un-idol-like. It's wonderful.

WELL, NO. BUT IT DEPENDS ON WHERE MY MUSES TAKE ME. SO. IDK YET. I-I apologize in advance if I do end up making you cry. My writing might not be up to par to that level of emotion though, so. maybe you won't cry. :D

lmao like my make up, shake up, break up sequence ;) except in the opposite order. (that was totally not a subtle SHINee reference) AHAHA THE FLUFF. NEEDLE IN A HAY STACK. but it's there, okay. :| I have been writing more AUs lately, huh? I used to never write those. Changes, changes. :'D

♥ I envy your red hearts.

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korn_lotr_luver November 29 2009, 04:59:33 UTC
gah. if only i could write like this.

great stuff yet again~ can't wait for the next chapter :DDD

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fingeredheart November 29 2009, 05:05:01 UTC
D'aw, flattered. ♥ thank you so much! Will try to get the next chapter up sooner. :)

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aijin_jin_17 November 29 2009, 05:19:52 UTC
It’s like you’re in love with him or something,
idk, but this line made me laugh for a moment XD

Angsty child you are (lol I'm such a comment stalker XD;)

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aijin_jin_17 November 29 2009, 05:20:29 UTC
Ah crap. LJ posted my comment early //stabs

anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. iluuuuuuuu.♥

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fingeredheart November 29 2009, 05:24:23 UTC
WELL. Jin is just. frustrated, okay. don't blame him for the idiotic correlations. ;D

)': I KNOW I'M ANGSTY. I CAN'T HELP IT. It is my nature. My calling in life. okay, not, but. still. ):

Well LJ is stupid >( and you're too cool for it. :DDDDD ilumoaaaaar, SAP. ♥

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bellemainec November 29 2009, 10:51:18 UTC
oooooh, poor Jin *cuddles JIn* I am glad to see that he has stepped up and gone on hiatus, but I am sure that he is going to go through some heartache as we go. I may have wibbled over the letting Kame go for Yamapi scene....I am glad that Pi set him straight.

I will forgive Kame for his silly comment as he was tired and stressed, and did call Jin in the first place, but yes I am glad he saw the press conference and he will apologise to save their friendship...which we all hope develops further.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

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fingeredheart November 29 2009, 18:30:59 UTC
Jin's getting there :)) and Kame, hopefully. They're both so angsty and confused, haha. >:

Thanks, bb! I'll try to get it up sooner. ♥

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kerua November 29 2009, 11:18:45 UTC
... back to where Kame is being perfect and cold and not like the person he gave his heart to.
I don't know why,but I just love this sentence ♥♥

Kame is in denial.So much.But it's kind of cute xD
And Jin is so adorable in this chapter ♥♥♥♥

Poor Pi! Ah,the angst! :(

Waiting for the next chapter,like always ♥

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fingeredheart November 29 2009, 18:32:03 UTC
Haha, thank you :)♥ I'm glad you liked this chapter. And I'm also (sadistically D:) glad that people are pitying Pi, because I'm tired of seeing him as the 'bad guy' so I'm trying to portray a different image. ;D

Thanks! Will try to get it up soon.

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