Comments | a_v_y: Lollypop

a_v_y

Lollypop

Jul 31, 2009 15:51

Title: Lollypop
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fandom:harry potter, pairing:harry/draco, fic:lollypop, bottom!draco

Comments 12

sony_kit82 August 1 2009, 09:45:41 UTC

this was just romantic. loved how draco seemed to be waiting for that special someone to be his first and how his first is going to be his last as well. loved harry's spiel about ron and how much he was in denial. the ending was so romantic but without the cliche mushy romance. loved how they both fought their feelings so hard but could not deny them in the end. :D

a_v_y August 1 2009, 11:34:51 UTC

wow, thanks so much! isn't it always the same with denial? I think it's cute when they try to deny the obvious :D
thanks again ^-^

phoenix_xd August 2 2009, 11:10:15 UTC

wow. i really loved this story!
i love harry's little speech about ron, how it seemed like he was so stressed while talking to draco about it.
and i loved how he just said "you heard me" and left.

and i love the last sentence!
"shut the git up with a kiss before he could ruin the moment again" XD

great story! :)

a_v_y August 2 2009, 18:44:26 UTC

uuh, thanks darling! XD
yeah, wouldn't you be stressed in such a situation? I think I would be XD

I always wished to make a perfect ending! yay, finally I've done it!
hihi, thanks ^__^

wide_eyed_raven August 2 2009, 12:40:19 UTC

I was kinda frustrated with Draco picking Ron... I mean, I wanted to hit him and say, "No! You belong to Harry!" :p But you fixed that quite neatly. It only took them forever to work it out.

Ron clearly has some issues... *scowls at the redhead* It makes me wonder if he really is gay...

What was Harry studying?

It was a lovely story, I kind of love how his first time wasn't perfect, because it hardly ever is. ^_^

a_v_y August 2 2009, 18:36:37 UTC

thanks ^____^
your review makes me kinda really happy, is that stupid? >.>
yeah... it took me quite a lot to pair him with Ron because I don't really like that pairing XD
yep, hihi, clearly issues!
hmm, I was wondering if I should mention that? but then again Draco didn't really wanted to hear about what Potter was doing (though he couln't stop wondering about him ;) ) he changed the subjects frequently and so did something in every direction. I imagined he started out with Defence againt the Dark Arts, then Charms in general and so on. I can't see him doing Muggle studies though XD

I actually think it was perfect the way it was - you know, imperfect *g*
thanks a lot again :D

thrnbrooke August 6 2009, 07:04:11 UTC

Wow! Wonder how he told Ron.

a_v_y August 7 2009, 09:46:08 UTC

hi, thanks for the review ^^
hehe, in front of the altar, that's for sure XD

westkitsune June 21 2010, 08:08:14 UTC

Definitely how the Harry/Draco story would have gone had they been living in the real world and not in some fantasy novel - haha, I kinda felt like I watched QaF for some reason (in a good way ofcourse!) ♥

norencja December 29 2010, 13:21:20 UTC

I really liked this story it's amazing: hot and adorable (and I love bottom!Draco), but the ending is strange. It's too short for sure. You don't give us explanation why Harry was mean to Draco after their first night, or when you start to love Draco? Why Ron don't love Draco? Why he starts relationship with him when he doesn't know that Harry love him ( ... )

a_v_y December 30 2010, 08:23:19 UTC

wow thanks for your comment!! i love it when someone really shares their thoughts with me and also criticises ( ... )

norencja December 30 2010, 11:07:48 UTC

Thank you for it. I really understand it better now.
Firstly I thought that Ron start relationship with Draco because he knew that Harry loves him and he wanted to take revenge on him for rejecting him in school.
But now everything have sense XD Thanks one more time.

I hope that you gonna win with posting block and that you will wrote something amazing :)