short stories: 'anya' + 'this is not my sister'

[aamonya]

AH I finally wrote something new today, miracle! I haven't written in agessss, well except for working on fanfiction now and then. I missed writing, seriously before I had the internet at home (didn't get it until I was like 15/16 *dies*), it was my MAIN OCCUPATION OF TIME AND BRAINSPACE. XD All my characters, storylines, etc, even now I love going

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[betsuni]

I loved both. I read them twice to decide which one I liked best. Anya made me so sad, for the whole family.. but especially the boy. I like the viewpoint by the way. It's always interesting.. I don't know, it kind of touches me more. I loved it and I think I'd have liked it even more if it was longer.

Now 'This is not my sister' is the one I liked best, I guess. They're twins, aren't they? I absolutely loved both characters. Audrey is.. totally the kind of female character I like reading about in novels. Oh my God, you can totally make a whole book about this, seriously. I can't find anything wrong with it! What didn't you like about it? I'd so love to hear more about Audrey and Louie. And you wrote it last year! You're an amazing writer.

[aamonya]

Thank you so much. And thank you so much for reading them! ♥ I love using 2nd-person, I have no idea why - but yeah, I think even from a writing perspective you feel like you can get more across using it. I initially started out in 1st-person but it just didn't feel right. XD I think I'll definitely work on Anya sometime, because I didn't develop it enough - but I finished it in 1 day, which is a miracle for me! XD

[kanika_ishtar]

You're so amazing at writing! The first one made me want to cry. I usally hate point of view stories, but you did it so well that I loved it. ^^