OK, the principal problem is that you do not use ',' before the name. Like in this case: '¿te acuerdas de mí Beth? ', it must be '¿te acuerdas de mí, Beth? '
Be more careful in the next time.
About the chapter. I like it. Liz is a strong woman now, i really love that. Chace... hmm i don't know if i like him yet, I don't even know him, but i can give him a chance, maybe.
It is so sad what happened to Liz... poor girl, rejected by the people of her town--so sad.
Okey, I waiting for the next chapter. For now, I still watching the program about cars. I'm see how make the Audi R8 *pleasure face*
Bueno como ya no estas por fotolog, aquí estoy fiel a ti y tus escritos, ya había leído estos capítulos, así que esperaré los nuevos. Estas en mis marcadores, así que pasaré siempre! Suerte con este nuevo mundo!
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Be more careful in the next time.
About the chapter. I like it. Liz is a strong woman now, i really love that. Chace... hmm i don't know if i like him yet, I don't even know him, but i can give him a chance, maybe.
It is so sad what happened to Liz... poor girl, rejected by the people of her town--so sad.
Okey, I waiting for the next chapter. For now, I still watching the program about cars. I'm see how make the Audi R8 *pleasure face*
xoxo!
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Estas en mis marcadores, así que pasaré siempre!
Suerte con este nuevo mundo!
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