Once Upon A Time There Was An Ocean

[abadplanwellex]

Next part's up...

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[fogsblue]

Rose needs to smack Nine, Just sayin'.

This chapter was great. But Nine is being an arse, though if he hasn't met Rose that makes sense.

[abadplanwellex]

Yeah, it's tricky, because I want to write Nine the way I would normally write Nine -- quietly besotted. But he definitely wasn't that way in the first episode (or at least early in that episode...). And DimensionCannon!Rose is a lot more suspicious in his book than 19-year-old ShopGirl!Rose.

[fogsblue]

You did it so well! He's definitely not his normal adoring-Rose self. Mind you, can't entirely blame him for being suspicious..