im sorry for the confusion, but thats exactly what i aimed for with this fic- until the end that is haha sexually aroused and mind fucked at the same time sounds amazing to me hahaha im really really happy it made you feel at least something cc: (the right things too!)
oh my god. oh my god oh my god oh my god. this actually made me cry at the end.
i'll tell you i had no idea wtf was going on during this fic. i didn't know who to believe but holy shit chanyeol's character was dark. this was so morbid and terrifying and really twisted but maybe that's why i liked it? i don't usually do the incest thing but you wrote it really well and the fact it was just baekhyun's stronger self and just like. WHAT.
i'm mindfucked and crying right now. baby baek no. omg. i can't believe. just. what. ugh he was such a cutie in this and i loved jongdae and just. i just wanted him to be HAPPY okay? which i guess he kind of is now but then again i mean. just poor little thing.
i hate you so much. i hate you. our friendship is over #bye. no im jk i l u. sob. hold me this is just too emotional. i need a good cry.
im glad i have this comment in my journal now<3 i tend to forget about the ones i get on exchange pages so i think ill always ask my friends to copy paste them to my journal now. because i really really really love to hear the thoughts of my friends most ;;;;
i deliberately made it so that the reader was like ????? throughout the fic it only slowly slowly reveals itself...the ugly truth i mean. chanyeol is a terrible terrible person and a liar. i think i need to write that into my A/N lol. chanyeol is a liar!!!i'm glad you gave this a try even though its incest ;; (bc its not really somehow
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holy fuck. holy fuck. HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK-- ok. i wouldn't stop cussing. i honesty had NO idea what was happening throughout the fic. i was sosososo confused to the point i reread some stuff in case i missed anything omG I EVEN WENT BACK TO PART 1 JUST TO READ THE WARNINGS AND STUFF LIKE I WAS MAKING SURE IF THIS WAS A FANTASY FIC OR SMT (i thought baekhyun was dead and it was his spirit or what HAHAHAHAHAh ok embarrassing #bye) it was fucking mind-blowing and very mind-fucking like who'd ever guess this all never happened in the first place i also love the incest in this one. baekhyun's "twin" was just protective and i always love each one person who's being overprotective towards sweet baby baek hihi best incest so fAR even if its twincest /standing applause this was by far the most amazingest fic i've read like i want to just hug you so tight and yell "daebak!!!1" out loud
i think the fic only makes sense if you read it to the very last word ;;;; im so sorry for how messy it is omg ;;
baekhyun being dead is not so bad of a guess though hahaha almost! im really really glad the end came as a surprise! i tried not to hint so much, but if you ever reread this mess you'll prolly see the hints now lol ;; HYUNG is basically baekhyun's protector. like...thats his sole raison d'etre. to love and protect baekhyun who suffered so much and grew up without even one person ever loving him.........that is until chanyeol ofc ;;; poor puppy.
i'm realyl really glad you liked it omg ;;;;;; thatk you ;;;;
;;;;;; not so innocent anymore /whispers idk what i was thinking when i plotted this tbh i just thought omg baekhyun/baekhyun i don't want this to be boring omg help. i'm glad you liked this even though it ruined your innocence ;;;
chanyeol is my second bias, but he makes a good douchebag cc: it seems like a few people started hating him after this fic nooo ;;;;
;;;;;; im so happy you gave this a try and finished it and took your time to tell me what it did to you. seriously it's me who loves you ;;; thank you<3
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sexually aroused and mind fucked at the same time sounds amazing to me hahaha im really really happy
it made you feel at least something cc: (the right things too!)
thank you for giving this fic a try<3
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this actually made me cry at the end.
i'll tell you i had no idea wtf was going on during this fic. i didn't know who to believe but holy shit chanyeol's character was dark.
this was so morbid and terrifying and really twisted but maybe that's why i liked it?
i don't usually do the incest thing but you wrote it really well and the fact it was just baekhyun's stronger self and just like. WHAT.
i'm mindfucked and crying right now. baby baek no. omg. i can't believe. just. what.
ugh he was such a cutie in this and i loved jongdae and just. i just wanted him to be HAPPY okay?
which i guess he kind of is now but then again i mean. just poor little thing.
i hate you so much. i hate you.
our friendship is over #bye.
no im jk i l u. sob. hold me this is just too emotional. i need a good cry.
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i tend to forget about the ones i get on exchange pages so
i think ill always ask my friends to copy paste them to my journal
now. because i really really really love to hear the thoughts of my
friends most ;;;;
i deliberately made it so that the reader was like ????? throughout the fic
it only slowly slowly reveals itself...the ugly truth i mean.
chanyeol is a terrible terrible person and a liar. i think i need to write that into
my A/N lol. chanyeol is a liar!!!i'm glad you gave this a try even though its incest ;; (bc its not really somehow ( ... )
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holy fuck bye
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i hope youre okay.
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holy fuck.
HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK--
ok. i wouldn't stop cussing. i honesty had NO idea what was happening throughout the fic. i was sosososo confused to the point i reread some stuff in case i missed anything omG
I EVEN WENT BACK TO PART 1 JUST TO READ THE WARNINGS AND STUFF LIKE I WAS MAKING SURE IF THIS WAS A FANTASY FIC OR SMT (i thought baekhyun was dead and it was his spirit or what HAHAHAHAHAh ok embarrassing #bye)
it was fucking mind-blowing and very mind-fucking like who'd ever guess this all never happened in the first place
i also love the incest in this one. baekhyun's "twin" was just protective and i always love each one person who's being overprotective towards sweet baby baek hihi best incest so fAR even if its twincest
/standing applause
this was by far the most amazingest fic i've read
like i want to just hug you so tight and yell "daebak!!!1" out loud
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for how messy it is omg ;;
baekhyun being dead is not so bad of a guess though hahaha almost!
im really really glad the end came as a surprise! i tried not to hint so much, but if you
ever reread this mess you'll prolly see the hints now lol ;;
HYUNG is basically baekhyun's protector. like...thats his sole raison d'etre. to love and
protect baekhyun who suffered so much and grew up without even one person ever loving
him.........that is until chanyeol ofc ;;; poor puppy.
i'm realyl really glad you liked it omg ;;;;;; thatk you ;;;;
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idk what i was thinking when i plotted this tbh i just thought
omg baekhyun/baekhyun i don't want this to be boring omg help.
i'm glad you liked this even though it ruined your innocence ;;;
chanyeol is my second bias, but he makes a good douchebag cc:
it seems like a few people started hating him after this fic nooo ;;;;
;;;;;; im so happy you gave this a try and finished it and took your time
to tell me what it did to you. seriously it's me who loves you ;;;
thank you<3
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