Hole in your Face 4/4

[abcdefghiluvyou]

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PART ONE, LJ IS MAKING ME SPLIT MY COMMENT

[exobubz]

okay so im going to make this comment as long as i possibly can bc i know how much i personally like long comments, esp. when i write something long, but i actually feel like you also deserve (not just a long but) a, i dont know, a deep comment i guess lol NOT VERY GOOD WITH WORDS but here we go

RE: PART 2, LJ IS MAKING ME SPLIT MY COMMENT

[exobubz]

Your portrayal of their abusive relationship and Baekhyun's naivety was just gold--GOLD. like olympic gold. I was DEEPLY satisfied when Chanyeol died. LIKe I HAVE NEVER SILENTLY REJOICED A CHARACTERS DEATH MORE THAN CHANYEOLS. Not that I didn't like Chanyeol. As a character, he was evil. But the way you wrote him was literally so great, I LOVED him. Kind of like watching a show on TV and one character is a total pain in everyone's ass but they're just so fffffking evil and smooth and manipulative, you're just like oooo youre written so well, i can't help but love you--- that kind of thing

RE: PART 3, LJ IS MAKING ME SPLIT MY COMMENT

[exobubz]

THE REVELATION IN THE END THO. GREAT. I've said great so many times, but literally, again, terrible with words. I think my favorite part of this... was the fact that in the end, this entire story, as you said, took place in his head. But that's not what amazed me, really. Yeah, it took place in his head (dont get me wrong this was WOW), but what wowed me even more was that, this story did not happen in one day. Baekhyun did not meet Chanyeol and kill him in his head in one day. This story stretched over weeks, months, but in the end, you realize that this entire time, he's just been staring at Chanyeol's dead body. I could be totally wrong and just rambled about something irrelevant, but I thought that was the coolest plot twist ever, that something you thought happened over a long course of time was only--truly--a fraction of a time in the real world. I don't know but i just have a thing for like, stories that incorporate time and tiny details like that

RE: PART 4, LJ IS MAKING ME SPLIT MY COMMENT

[exobubz]

There might've NOT been a parallel at all but in stories like these, (and movies; ex. Sucker Punch), there's always a parallel and I like looking for potential connections just because it makes everything clearer, and, I, personally, love psychological stories, but at the same time, I want to know bits and pieces of the "Real world" part of such stories.

OH! Another example of a movie is Shutter Island. but yeah.I usually wrap up comments to talk about the writing quality, but huuuuu i've already said great too many times. My favorite story in the whole wide wide wide world / web, is In the Territory of the Dragon King bc Curledupkitten's writing was just so umffff--- but like honestly, for a good hour or two after reading this, I was like... IT CAME SO CLOSE to knocking ITTOFDK to #2. That's how great it was. Like honestly. I've only read Redemancy from you and then this, but I can already tell what kind of author your are and what your style is, so I totally admire that. I think it's cool. You are like... Italian strawberry Gellato

[blackredandblue]

I'm so in love with this fix tbh- idk why xD you're an amazing writer and thank you for sharing this with us!

[abcdefghiluvyou]

thank you<3 for giving this a try and for liking it enough to tell me haha c:
even though though you don't know why you like it it makes me happy that it does<3

[crosseddaisies]

Okay so it's been a long time since I've read something that genuinely made me feelsomething. I can honestly say that even with all the ambiguous meanings this has got to be one of my favorite pieces ever. I've never hurt so badly for a story but this one was something worth being torn apart over. I'm so glad I read this. I didnt know what I was getting into at first but I can honestly say that I'm glad I let myself fall. This was written so well & I'm not exaggerating in the slightest when I say it's better than the things I've seen published by best selling authors. I don't know where you come up with these plots and ideas but I'm so thankful that you come up with them nonetheless. I hope one day I can see your books and stories in stores because I would buy all of your works. Your writing style is one of the greatest I've seen by far and I've read a lot over the years. You don't need to be published to be a great writer and you've proved that for me. Thank you for combining the two things I love (EXO & writing) in such a beautiful

[abcdefghiluvyou]

oh wow, oh wow your comment ;;; i teared up.
I'm so so so happy and thankful for your kind words and especially for the fact that you felt
something while reading this. i am feeling sorry for hurting you with what happened to baekhyun, but
i'm so happy too -im so sorry ;;; i'm so thankful you liked this even though it was so different from what
you expected. thank you for giving this a chance and for letting me know how much you liked it -i'm so
emotional right now ;;;;;;

I ;;; don't know what to reply to all this praise ;;; I'm just glad you liked my poopstory so much -and it made
me feel so much better and prouder about it thank you

i feel like i said thank you too many times but i really mean it -even though i can just express it like this, and
your words were so so so good for me, i feel so much better and happier now ;;; thank you<3333

[toni_luv]

Finally remembered!! LOL!!! Now to the story!!
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Once again your stories make me think more. Read slowly and let everything sync in. First chapter entry even I suppressed a squeak along with Baekhyun what the hell guy just approach so bold so daring with that seductive voice. Out of know where! Shyt didn't even buy Baekhyun a drink. am I dreaming right.. or is my crush really hugging me right now.. someone pinch me!" Chanyeol tighten his hold around B's waist breathe fanning his ear. fuck this is real! I asked for a pinch not squeeze ---oh god his mouth his grazing my ear ALERT! ALERT! ERECTION THREATENING TO SALUTE!!! everything came crashing down before take off! did he just say yesterday? yesterday! wasn't even out yesterday except for ---- *music screeches to halt* ----- Hyung he is so gonna get it.. he'll be receiving a new pierce when I get home more like hyperventilate inside hyungs arms. this line caught my attention! "That he's part of your life again, how unfortunate, baby." ....

[toni_luv]

Nope guess not if Hyung isn't suspicious of his and Chanyeol's relationship. Hyung doesn't find it weird the guy that stalked him out of the blue suddenly stopped texting him? How did these two met in the first place at a frap party? Baekhyun finally got his crush. The question is : Is he happy with this kind of relationship he did steal him away from his hyung who warned him this guy is no good. Okay since when warning someone not do will help. You know damn well that person is going to do the exact opposite. Tell them not to do they will end up doing it. Hyung Baekhyun just went and done it. You knew he smitten over Chanyeol. -- Chanyeol being a controlling douchebag here.. it's a one side sex here... naive gullible Baekhyun will do anything for his crush. Bad sign right there. Timid Baekhyun did not sign up for a S&M gig... Jongdae saw the signs too. You did push B a little into this mess. You know. after denying sex ...that look, that look alone set off warning bells. run Baek run! no no don't try --- ah shit he did it. got hit

[toni_luv]

you can't be serious jongdae! you're against hyung didn't you say baek should slow down from fucking like bunnies. did baek even tell you what that bastard did to your friend!? you want baek choose between his twin and chanyeol!? oh my god.. I can't even. that's it *shuts up laptop* next time you drive mad personality you understand this better than confusion. don't think I forgiven you park! hyung kick this motherfathers ass!! kick his ass! again you drawn my attention to hyung who doesn't make any sense.. okay so you aren't happy that park is in this picture.. but you are happy just long as baek and park remain far far away across campus? this is madness I tell you! *pillow flops* is baek fucking serious right now.. did parks fist didn't make it clear here he's a beater?... you fuckin care about hyung confirmed it he did screw chanyeol a lot last time.. that's it.. *throws sock at baekhyun's face* bakka! "He destroyed you once, I'm not going to let him do it again" soo he shredded and broke baekhyun before... oh god... please tell

[abcdefghiluvyou]

oh god haha. you really really lived through this fic hahaha. I feel like i can feel your fury frustration and anger
right through your words.

i'm not so sure if you enjoyed it or not hahaha, but you took your time to go through it and tell me about it and for
that i'm really really thankful ccc: i really hope you enjoyed it and that it wasn't too frustrating and confusing to
you.

thank you for your time and words<3

[baekfics]

So I had to report it here. Hope I'm in right wall post. That was so embarassing

[abcdefghiluvyou]

puhaha it was fine as it was before tho c: no worries haha <3
i replied to your comment further up where you first posted it hehe c: