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abelina

Could Be You ~ Chapter 5/?

Jan 29, 2010 19:08

The moan rolled through her, starting in her belly and slipping past her lips with the same intensity as the thrust that caused it. Spike’s lithe form was a welcomed weight on top of her and the touch of his cool skin a sharp contrast to the feverish heat consuming her body. The world existed out there somewhere, but here and now Spike saturated ( Read more... )

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Comments 16

xtanitx January 30 2010, 03:27:09 UTC

Hooray! I'm about to crash for the night, so I'm not reading just yet, but I wanted to cheer that it's here. :D Will read & comment on it when I'm a bit more with it.

Okay, WOW. That's not profound, I know, but oh my jeez. That was incredibly sexy (mmm, bitey goodness!), and the emotion! GUH. It's a one-two punch, that, and you do it so well. I have so many questions about what comes next, and so will eagerly await chapter six! :)

abelina February 1 2010, 18:51:38 UTC

Thanks for dropping in to leave the I-will-read-later note. I appreciated that!

And a big ol' WOW is more profound than you think! And so much appreciated. I can't tell you how nice it is, after struggling to write this, to get such a great response to this chapter. I'm glad you have questions!! I hope I can answer some of them!!

kaitlyn_lehman January 30 2010, 04:28:54 UTC

Holy frijoles that was amazing! *fans self* I will use my sex icon for this.

abelina February 1 2010, 18:53:55 UTC

I like your sex icon! Thank you!

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abelina February 1 2010, 18:55:10 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :D

peroxidelove January 30 2010, 08:08:04 UTC

Guh.

I've been so excited for this chapter, but now that I've read it, I'm completely speechless and also breathess.

Simply amazing and brilliant and sexy and touching...but not in that way *shifty eyes*.

I love!

abelina February 1 2010, 18:56:19 UTC

I'm so glad that it didn't disappoint after such a long wait! Trust me, I was worried about that! Your words make me smile!

Touching, did you say? LOL

aerintine January 30 2010, 08:53:34 UTC

meep!

that's all i can manage for now. will return later when i can once again feel my limbs. :)

abelina February 1 2010, 18:57:18 UTC

Your meep made me think of the Road Runner!

I was thinking Buffy's limbs might be a little bit numb by now, but yours too? That Spike's good isn't he? LOL, thank you!!