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[abicyclewinter]

Used my favorite writing meme to try and get back into it. These are all written about Harry and Louis from One Direction. :)

(Also, not all of the drabbles I wrote for this meme are under the cut because I wasn't super thrilled with a few. The ratings vary on these from safe to mature.)

Comments

[colazitron]

Oh, these are all absolutely lovely, but it's cold and dark here right now, so I cling to the last one especially. Such lovely summer feelings. <3

I love the intimacy and entangled-ness of their lives in the first two.

The third is just hot and the thought of Louis letting Harry just take his time is... *fans self*

I always love seeing them through an outside perspective and I really like Liam comparing them to an epic love story and how their behaviour with each other excludes others not by design, but just because they are such a tightly woven unit.

And, oh, smoking kink and the aforementioned delicious summery feelings. (Also, those are amazing swim trunks that Louis should actually own IRL. And have his picture taken in.)

[dorkle_07]

!!! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked all of them! (Your comment made my day because your fic is so awesome and I love all of it!)

<3 they make writing intimate moments so easy sometimes. (All those subtle touches and glances. *___* come on, boys.)

I don't even know where else to go! A: Harry's mouth. YES. (Blowjobs...bowls..whatever. YES TO ALL OF IT.) Outside perspective fic is awesome and more people should write it because *___*

and I'll bet Louis totally has some tiny trunks or something like that and he's just being a tease and KEEPING THEM FROM US, THE LITTLE JERK.

<3 Thanks for the comment!

[imagination55]

I have no words. No wonder this is your favourite writing meme because these are absolute frickin' GOLD. I think you capture their ease with each other really well and also how torturous their naughty feelings can be sometimes, heh.

Lovely stuff. You should definitely continue to write more of these two.

PS. god damn Louis’ ass is fucking majestic. - AMEN. (Crass, but I couldn't leave without agreeing!)

[dorkle_07]

Thanks so much! I think they make writing really easy because they are just clearly so smitten with one another!

And I'm totally going to work on more of these. They come so easily once you get started.

And totally not crass. HIS ASS DESERVES TO BE COMMENTED ON.

[k_sewell1d]

all of these are just so lovely. I'm particularity taken by the fourth one. Liam's perspective on the subtlety and intimacy of their relationship was charming to read. really enjoyable, thank you for posting. xx

[dorkle_07]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed them! :D

[cassiehayes]

ahhhhh, these are all so lovely! i especially liked how the one about harry being gone to visit his family had such a sweet ~domestic feel to it, and then also seeing them from liam's perspective, that was really cool. and ohhh, i love how in the last one you made eleanor the awesome friend and them all getting along, because that is how i like to imagine things, ha. and the star on louis's hip and harry running his tongue over it, hnggg. lovely image right there.

[dorkle_07]

Thank you! :D

I love thinking of Eleanor as Louis' badass bestie who he has sleepovers with and giggles about stuff with. (In my head they go shopping and are fierce and trade sex tips and Eleanor loves to make Louis buy stuff that will just make Harry really sexually frustrated.)

<3!

[cassiehayes]

Hahaha, yeeees I love it! The guys have described her being pretty much like a female version of Louis after all, which I find amusing to imagine, lol, so I love the thought of stuff like that. Do not understand fic where she's like ~vilified because really, regardless what you believe the relationship actually is or isn't, you'd think at the very least they'd have to be pretty close friends? So, to cut rambling the short lol, yeah, I just really enjoyed this characterization of her :3

[dorkle_07]

For real! I hate when people write the girlfriends as evil bitches. Use them as writing tools! They are good vehicles for stuff! EVERY ADORABLE GAY COUPLE NEEDS A GIRL WHO WILL TAKE ONE OF THEM SHOPPING AND GIVE HIM SEX TIPS.

Sometimes I just want to write ALL the fic about El and Louis being besties.

[livigirl98]

Okay I loved it! I love song scrabbled though, and this was no exception! The last one was my favorite

[livigirl98]

That was totally supposed to say drabbles not scrabbled, stupid fucking iPhone

[dorkle_07]

Ahaha thank you! I was wondering what you meant when you said scrabbled! Silly iPhone!