fiction: Bad Fairies

[abigail_nicole]

Bad Fairies

Comments

[liliths_requiem]

God your fiction is amazing. I used to read it, when I had a different account, and I always loved the way your stories seem so surreal while remaining grounded enough to make sense.

This is absolutely beautiful, especially because the ending isn't expected. It reminds me so much of The Goblin Market, but I acutally like this better than that poem. In the poem you know the other sister will give her life to protect her sister, but here it isn't as expected.

Perfect, in ways I can't even begin to describe, I loved it.

[abigail_nicole]

Actually, the ending here reminded me (and I didn't do it on purpose) of the ending in sassafras28's story.

and thank you! I've never read The Goblin Market, but I'm not sleepy at all so I shall Google it.

[liliths_requiem]

Now I'm going to read that story in the morning.
And the poem's long and a bit frustrating, not because it's difficult but because it's so descriptive, but I like it. I can't remember who wrote it. We did it for school in January.

[liveintrees]

oh wow, this is creepy and lovely and just... wow. your writing is amazing.

[abigail_nicole]

thank you! it did have tea, and rain, and sheltering houses. though I hope you're not a pregnant twin with bad fairies chasing after you.

I should be thanking you, after all. I was supposed to write something for amanda and wouldn't have except you inspired me.

[emmelinep]

there was such a long time between 14 and 15, but because of this, i forgive you.

[abigail_nicole]

oooh, I wrote 17 in bed this morning.

17.
Spelunking, 1969.
It must have been the electric kool-aid, because I swear the floor looked higher up.

[musical_writer]

I couldn't finish this because it hit home with my mother and I so much. I started crying from the beginning.

[abigail_nicole]

I'm sorry. I'm so sorry.

[firststar_isee]

this is just creepy....I don't think day 10 fits very well...the writing just doesn't seem to fit very well, and some of the phrases don't seem to sound right in this story. Hard to explain. The small amount of drama caused by the one sister being offended seems unrealistic when the given situation would probably completely drowned it out. I dunno, maybe I'm just strange and rambling. I like it though.

[abigail_nicole]

well thanks :P

[firststar_isee]

Notice how I said I like it :P

and you just chose to ignore that part of my comment :P

I love you. I did like it.

<3