Fiction: Sleeping Machines

[abigail_nicole]

Sleeping Machines

Comments

[ash_and_flame]

I'd take offense at the community college remark, except that I don't have a clue what dimensional analysis is and I'm at a community college so um yeah. :P

But anyway. I like it a lot. It was a bit confuddling in a few places but what the hey it's the first draft. Is this going to remain a one-shot, short story thing or are you going to continue?

And hey cool you're back at your actual school how is it?

[abigail_nicole]

I'm sorry! I didn't mean to insult anyone, just despairing of hard college calculus. booooo.

where was it confusing? I'll try to clarify it; I'm thinking on making it longer or part of something else that has more of a point.

school? terrifying. I'm a freshman in college hundreds of miles from home surrounded by mostly people I don't know learning material and doing homework I've never had to do before. but other than that it's great. there are amazing people here.

[emmelinep]

its is part of something else. its section 23.

[ash_and_flame]

haha it's okay I was kidding. College calculus would probably make my brain implode if I attempted it.

The paragraph that started with "I stay awake for--oh, it depends...." confused me too.

[sugarlungs]

oh dude, i LOVE THIS.

the only part that was kind of confusing for me was the paragraph that starts with "I stay awake for--oh, it depends...."

but oh geez. i wish i had yr ability to write long, coherent pieces.

[abigail_nicole]

really? about the technicalities of how to be a sleeping machine? maybe. it's less story. dunno.
it's terrific windy here.