Fiction: Be Nice Or Leave Part One

[abigail_nicole]

I sent this off to TWO betas two weeks ago and neither has returned it. (This started as my 2008 halloween story, by the way. it took me 9 months to write it.) SO HERE IT IS. the next installation in the Delilah house, a time-travelling extravaganza with love! loneliness! fires! children! and a brightly-colored air force! In roughly 13,000 words

Comments

[emmelinep]

I totally have it. i'm sorry. I'll send you my thoughts on it soon.

[abigail_nicole]

no, it's fine. I fixed some typos and continuity errors. I have a lot more interconnectedness than I realized. I'm so clever I surprise myself.

[emmelinep]

you're fucking adorable. and clever.

[abigail_nicole]

NOT adorable. and JR said my jokes (which are mostly bad puns) aren't funny. but I am clever at times.