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In perfect stillness, only sorrow

Dec 01, 2010 19:30

Title: In perfect stillness, only sorrow
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't own them; just borrowing.
Summary: Kate/Sawyer, post-finale. There's one place on her body he is not allowed to touch.
Spoilers: through The End
Notes: for lost_in_108 prompt #61: mark. The title is from Barbara Kingsolver's novel The Poisonwood Bible: “Listen. To live is to be marked. ( Read more... )

character: james 'sawyer' ford, comm: lost_in_108, rating: pg-13, pairing: kate/sawyer, fandom: lost, character: kate austen

Comments 27

ozmissage December 6 2010, 22:25:47 UTC

This is stunning work.

aboutbunnies December 11 2010, 19:02:50 UTC

Thanks so much!

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aboutbunnies December 11 2010, 19:03:13 UTC

Thanks so much! So glad this worked.

primarycolors92 December 9 2010, 02:26:03 UTC

Oh this is perfect, it's so them. I love the combination of distance and intimacy in the first line, it's really stunning.

aboutbunnies December 11 2010, 19:03:38 UTC

Aw, thank you - so glad you felt this did them justice.

irishunicorn03 December 9 2010, 16:08:08 UTC

I love the absolute brokenness of this. Very stunning.

aboutbunnies December 11 2010, 19:03:59 UTC

Thank you so much.

dulcedeusex December 10 2010, 13:02:23 UTC

Aww dude, just when I thought I was done with this doomed ship, this brings me right back to that place that had me writing my first fanfic.

“Sawyer,” she hisses between her teeth, angry, and it's the only time she doesn't call him James, anymore.

-- Chills.

aboutbunnies December 11 2010, 19:04:51 UTC

Aw, thanks. I'm so glad this brought you back :)