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Burn Up Hard and Bright

Jan 29, 2011 10:36

Figured I'd post the two fics I wrote for the Five Acts meme earlier this month. I still have one more fic for this meme halfway written; if I ever get it finished I'll post that, too - no one minds a late gift, right? We'll see how it goes.

Title: Burn Up Hard and Bright
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't own them; just borrowing.
Summary: She could ( Read more... )

pairing: kara/vipers, fandom: battlestar galactica, pairing: kara/zak, event: five acts, character: lee adama, rating: pg-13, pairing: kara/lee, character: kara thrace

Comments 16

exbex January 29 2011, 17:11:07 UTC

Beautifully written; I can almost feel everything she senses, both inward and outward.

aboutbunnies January 30 2011, 00:27:37 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting :) I'm so glad you could feel this.

scifishipper January 29 2011, 17:15:59 UTC

Wow. That's a raw and powerful piece of writing. Gah. I adore it!

aboutbunnies January 30 2011, 00:28:09 UTC

Thanks so much - I'm so glad you found this affecting!

kag523 January 29 2011, 19:18:20 UTC

Oh - I ADORE the connection you've created with Kara and the viper. And the whole painful connection with Lee that she cannot deny. Really beautifully written. Love this. Absolutely love it.

*hugs tight*

(Do you mind if I friend you so I can follow new things you write?)

aboutbunnies January 30 2011, 19:29:57 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and for the lovely comment :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

Definitely feel free to friend me, sure!

kag523 January 30 2011, 19:50:20 UTC

I have to tell you I really do love your writing. This little section right here:

Yaw. She hears, rather than feels, the unzipping of her flight suit, and she groans, her body thrumming with grief and want. She ruts against him, pulls him closer to her, tighter, tighter. She could get lost here, between him and the Viper, and just disappear.

She loses equilibrium too quickly. A free-fall, a spin (and oh, gods, is this what he felt, burning up in the atmosphere?).

Just makes me ache. Really lovely. Thank you again for writing! ( I want more... MORE!)

*hugs* Karin :>)

aboutbunnies February 4 2011, 21:55:22 UTC

Thank you so much, again :) I'm always delighted to know what sections in particular grabbed people.

koolaidmom11 January 29 2011, 21:08:48 UTC

Wow...just wow. What a beautiful, emotional piece. Do you write often? Do you want to be friends on LJ? let me know

aboutbunnies January 30 2011, 19:31:35 UTC

Thank you so much - I'm so glad this affected you.

This is my writing/fanfiction journal - definitely feel free to friend me if you'd like to keep up with what I write. I mostly write for Lost, but have written some other BSG pieces, and probably will write more in the future :)

jeebs83 January 30 2011, 00:19:00 UTC

Really beautifully written. :)

aboutbunnies January 30 2011, 19:31:53 UTC

Thank you so much :)