Sunburn

[abruer17]

The sun began to stand directly above them,
hideously spitting on their bare shoulders.
As the shadows hid from their advesary
the builders feared to show their faces
at the thought of rough tongues licking their flesh.

Comments

[thought_rain45]

i like this one; i can't really explain why, though

[abruer17]

is it because of its magnificent use of the word "spit"?