Our First -Part 2-

Apr 19, 2008 22:11



Title: Our First

Pairing: Akame

Genre: RPS, romance, fluff, friendship

Rating: PG-13

Words: 5.127

Disclaimer: I own all of my imagination of these pretty boys. But these pretty boys are under Johnny’s Entertainment.

Summary: Kazuya is a virgin even if he is a big idol. Jin offered himself to be Kazuya’s first.

Author’s Note: My first attempt on ( Read more... )

akame, fanfic

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fr_gal April 19 2008, 16:30:13 UTC
X3 aww, that was really cute. and your english is not bad at all.

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abuchan April 20 2008, 07:06:23 UTC
thx for reading...
i' happy that u understand it...

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sumomo_yuki April 19 2008, 17:21:41 UTC
awww so cute... ur english is not too bad!!! it's pretty good! maybe some wrong choice of words but it's good! like permit maybe should be permission? because permit is licence (american english) or license (british english)

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abuchan April 20 2008, 07:08:49 UTC
i'm glad you like it...
thx for the correction...

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abuchan April 20 2008, 07:10:59 UTC
thx...
huah, ureshii...
fufufu, i want to write more then...

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chubbione April 19 2008, 20:35:49 UTC
Yes, I agreed that it is good. Well done!
You should write more Akame fics. Thanks
for this one.

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abuchan April 20 2008, 07:12:25 UTC
sankyu...
yay, i will write more...
thx for commenting...

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goneonline123 April 20 2008, 01:23:46 UTC
Your english isn't bad, not at all :D

Aww, this was so sweet and cute. That was really good, write more ne? xD

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abuchan April 20 2008, 07:13:44 UTC
thx u like it...
i definitely write more...
coz akame rocks...

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