Comments | abvh100: Challenge #64: The Moon -- "Meet the Moon"

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Challenge #64: The Moon -- "Meet the Moon"

Oct 01, 2007 17:59

It had been a long month. Things had been busy at Guilty Pleasures: I had worked on two new routines each for Nathaniel and myself. Things had also been busy at the Circus: Anita's issues with Jean-Claude and Asher’s relationship had caused strain between the two vampires and the tension was palpable when walking the old underground halls. There ( Read more... )

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sabriel_0405 October 1 2007, 23:18:24 UTC

This was lovely. You did a very nice job of describing the atmosphere. I would argue that Jason does have pack ties. But I can see him wanting to run with Nathaniel. Hope this is the first of many!

firedancer03 October 1 2007, 23:49:01 UTC

Thanks!

Maybe I worded it wrong then... I agree the Jason has pack ties. I meant that since pack business was taken care of the night before there was nothing pack-related keeping him from doing what he wanted.

I was already working on a second one, but was hoping for some feedback first... and then I started getting my head into my personal writing, so I think I'm gonna hit that while the characters seem to be up for playing. But I'm glad you like it! *grins hugely*