Fic - it all comes down to you (Donna/Harvey) pg-13, 1/1

Dec 20, 2012 11:26

Title: it all comes down to you 
Summary: Harvey is finding more and more lately that she fills the space around him with something that breathes a hint of possibility.
Rating: pg-13
Author's Notes: 2,983 words. CHRISTMAS FIC! Set in the (hopefully) not too distant future. General series spoilers. All mistakes are mine. These two idiots, ( Read more... )

character: harvey specter, fic: suits, rating: pg-13, !fic, pairing: donna paulsen/harvey specter

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alinaandalion December 20 2012, 17:26:30 UTC
Yeah, have I told you how much I love your writing? Because, this....

Sorry, I have no words at the moment because I'm too busy trying to remember what to do with my hands other than happy flailing.

Coherent feedback pending. Will be back later. :)

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abvj December 20 2012, 19:22:38 UTC
YOU ARE TOO KIND TO ME.

This was totally indulgent and I thought it would come off too schmoopy, but I think it works best that way? I mean, it's Christmas fic. IT HAS TO HAVE A HAPPY ENDING.

Thank you for reading!

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alinaandalion December 21 2012, 23:23:56 UTC
Schmoopy always works for Christmas fic. That is, like, the one time a year when I just want all the fluff in the world so I can smile and feel all warm inside.

I still can't get over how well you get inside their heads and their relationship. Because they're best friends first and always, so they know each other, and that makes both of them so vulnerable with each other but yet beyond comfortable.

On the stoop outside her door, he reaches for her, pulls her to him just so he can breathe in her warmth and make it his own.

At their sides, his fingers tangle with hers. She doesn’t let go.

WHY ARE YOUR WORDS SO PERFECT AND AWESOME AND BEAUTIFUL?

I cannot wait for this show to come back.

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lapiccolina December 20 2012, 17:43:40 UTC
BEST PRESENT!!!

Thank you, oh so much!!! Your suits universe is like a playground of happiness and yummy candy/food where you can eat forever and not get fat. :)

Oh, this is gorgeous prose! The quietness of it all, yet sprinkled with their playful banner. I like how this is all in Harvey's head and the thought process in realizing he has been in love this entire time. I can so see this happening on the show!!! Squeeeeee.

I am horrible at movie titles!!! I am so gonna have to wiki it, lol.

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abvj December 20 2012, 19:27:54 UTC
YOU ARE SO WELCOME. I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT!

I've had this done for a while, but, um, I've been super lazy about posting? I apologize! I just love these two. I thought it would have faded by now, but NOPE. NADA. STILL GOING STRONG. I have one more fic I wrote for holiday fic, so expect that soon if you're interested. Figures the only holiday fic I wrote this year is Harvey/Donna. Heh.

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lapiccolina December 20 2012, 20:44:05 UTC
Hee. Although next time, I may ask for Elementary fic!!!

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abvj December 21 2012, 18:23:09 UTC
One day I will write them. They are too awesome not to at least try.

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magisterequitum December 21 2012, 00:23:09 UTC
I KNOW ONE OF THEM IS FROM LOVE, ACTUALLY.

So I win half a cookie? :)

This is wonderful and lovely. As are all of your fics for them. I've missed fic from you (and you).

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abvj December 21 2012, 18:24:57 UTC
Yes, Love, Actually! I couldn't not quote that movie in this fic. I don't care how ridiculous it makes me.

Thanks for reading ♥

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treblebeth December 21 2012, 00:28:04 UTC
I haven't had time to read any D/H in months but this just popped up on my list and I just had to read it. so lovely, as your writing always is. I can't wait to see what's in store for us..

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abvj December 21 2012, 18:25:42 UTC
I cannot wait until January 17th!!!! This show literally ate my brain this summer/fall. I need it back in my life.

Thank you for reading!

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onlywordsnow December 21 2012, 07:19:31 UTC
Crying tears that indicate happiness and speechlessness.

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abvj December 21 2012, 18:26:34 UTC
Only Harvey and Donna could reduce me to writing sappy Christmas fic! *sighs* These two idiots... constantly ruining my life.

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