Comments | abvj: Fic - just hit pause (Elena/Damon) R, 1/1

abvj

Fic - just hit pause (Elena/Damon) R, 1/1

Jan 22, 2013 18:01

Title: just hit pause
Summary: There is sex. And Feelings. But not very much plot because this is written for porn battle.
Rating: r
Author's Notes: 1,524 words. Set during 4x10, probably right before the last scene if you want to stay canonical. Written for the prompts love, want, skin, and eyes over at Porn Battle XIV. Not my sandbox, so con- ( Read more... )

fic: the vampire diaries, challenge: porn battle, pairing: elena gilbert/damon salvatore, !fic, character: damon salvatore, rating: r

Comments 17

bleodswean January 23 2013, 20:41:11 UTC

Really very exquisite!

abvj January 23 2013, 21:01:50 UTC

Thank you very much!

catteo January 24 2013, 09:30:53 UTC

This is like the feelings version of hot porn! I loved it! It's perfectly in character and sex in the front seat of a car is one of my all time favourite tropes. And this fits beautifully with where they're at right now. The need and the want, but also this underlying hint of restraint that they can't quite sustain. PERFECTO!

abvj January 27 2013, 21:36:21 UTC

CAR SEX IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE THINGS TOO. Like, there is simply just not enough of it out there.

Thank you for reading!

mlb388 January 31 2013, 18:42:31 UTC

I loved this. It's clear that they both really want each other and it's hard to be apart like when any relationship is new. I hate that they threw the sire bond into this but it was clear that Elena had feelings for Damon pre-vampire and she even told Matt about it. I'm so glad she told him at the end that she chooses him whether she is cured or not. He needs to hear that and be reassured. I love the fact that they laugh together which is something she never did with Stefan. They bring out good things in each other.