Fic - the next bold move (Lizzie/Darcy) nc-17, 1/1

[abvj]

Title: the next bold move
Summary: The one with the first time.
Rating: nc-17
Author's Notes: 3,084 words. Set in the not too distant future. Written for the prompts first date, modern, bite marks at Porn Battle XIV. All mistakes are mine. These characters, however, are not.

Comments

[ancarett]

This is beautiful and really kind of perfect for them!

[abvj]

Thank you!

[redbrunja]

This was wonderful. I adored Darcy's reverence with Lizzie, and how he's so conscious (and embarrassed) about the sounds he's making and trying to hold himself back a bit.

Fabulous.

[abvj]

The only thing I do not love about this show (Lydia's diaries not included) is that will probably never, ever get to see these two in appropriate makeouts. It just isn't fair.

Thank you for reading!

[torigates]

MAN THIS IS GOOD. (I almost said this is so fucking good, but really this is some GOOD FUCKING.) I really loved the way everything felt and the tone and just how INTIMATE everything feels. LOVE IT.

[abvj]

(I almost said this is so fucking good, but really this is some GOOD FUCKING.)

This is probably my favorite part of any comment to date. It is just so awesome. Thank you for reading!!!!