Poem-a-Day #13 Eden I

[acaciatinderbox]

It's done, but not edited fully.

Eden IHunting milk-blue-light dusk down, I thrive

Comments

[anythingelse6]

"fork-tongue-taste the air" works so well! You're fantastic.

Also, _quixotic_ comes from a comparison to Don Quixote. Words are fabulous.

Finally, this is a really good poem, and we should talk about it on the trip.

In conclusion, I like introducing my sentences with these--what are they called?--conjunctive adverbial phrases.

See you tomorrow.

[anythingelse6]

Also, Ben Johnson was accused of "popery." I love that word. POPERY. I'm going to use it all the time.