A Little Fall Of Rain

[acastleonacloud]

A Little Fall of Rain

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Chad Danforth sneaked Charlie’s Angel style to his target. He squinted, aiming his ammunition at the back of his mark’s head. He tossed the tortilla chip at Ryan Evans head, sniggering quietly as it hit the blonde boy and bounced off his head, down the back of his shirt.

“Hey Danforth.”

Comments

[mugglerock]

Soon, they had been absorbed in the kiss long enough for Chad to be soaked from afro to toe.

I absolutely LOVED that line. Great job!

[acastleonacloud]

Thank you :D

[soavantgarde]

Aw it was cute. :)
you might want to watch your tenses though, you switched up a lot towards the end.

[acastleonacloud]

Yea, I know. -bangs head on desk- I did it in under an hour for a last minute challenge, and I got a bit distracted towards the end, so it got all messed up. I should fix it xD

[maomarty]

yes!
so cute *.*

[joyful]

Awwwwwwwww! That is so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!

[revs_harlot]

aww loved it