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accio_remus

Missing Piece Part 16

Feb 17, 2006 23:04

A smile came over the young man’s face and he jumped up from the couch and retrieved a thick album from one of the bookcases that lined the living room walls ( Read more... )

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unbroken_halo February 18 2006, 04:32:58 UTC

Sweet! I love the twists to canon.

jadzia7667 February 19 2006, 01:41:12 UTC

Lovely. I like the new canon (smirks...it should have happened this way). Harry's so matter of fact about the things that have happened to him. Poor Remus is reeling...gonna be an interesting ride from here to the end.

carpe_slytherin February 19 2006, 07:57:00 UTC

I agree with the others about the way you worked canon in. Nice! And the last line? Definitely a warm fuzzy moment.

aigooism May 16 2007, 15:51:00 UTC

Hrm... I see a bit of continuity error here. In the beginning Luna was married to Ron, right? But here you implied she's dead? Just pointing it out. ^_^

accio_remus May 16 2007, 19:38:24 UTC

Yes, sorry. This was fixed in the fanfiction.net version but I forgot to go back and do it on livejournal.