Fanfic - Tender Loving Care (Improv-a-Ganza)

Aug 07, 2011 12:21

Title: Tender Loving Care
Author: Mel (accordingtomel)
Characters/Pairings: Jeff/Chip
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,030
Disclaimer: All 100% false. Just me being silly. No offense meant to anyone reading or those in the fic.
Warnings: Um, so I used a pet name in this. I usually hate them, but for some reason it felt right to me. Anyway, I just wanted to warn for it ( ( Read more... )

improv-a-ganza, jeff/chip, fanfic

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jie_jie August 7 2011, 19:44:19 UTC
Aw, this was a very warm and lovely sick-fic. Gotta love a nice bit of fluffiness every now and again. :)

The text messages were great, by the way. They gave me a giggle. ^_^

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accordingtomel August 8 2011, 04:15:25 UTC
Aww, thank you so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed this :)

It makes me especially happy to hear that you liked the text messages. Those were a lot of fun to write, and I like to think that Jeff might actually do something like that in real life too. Anyway, thanks so much! :)

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sungreen70 August 7 2011, 20:25:22 UTC
My prompt my prompt you wrote my prooooooooompt!!!!! *ahem*

First few paragraphs in and I'm already in hysterics over the text messages. You know, I really like how you write Dan. I know next to nothing about him, but since he's apparently such a great friend of Jeff's, it's cool to see him in fics. I love the personality you give him in your stories - it seems to fit with what I've read of his tweets.

Aww, sick Jeff is adorably pathetic. And Chip's greeting is so sweet.

LOL at the Jersey Shore snark!

*snort* I love Jeff's long list of requests about the bath water and taking out the garbage, etc.

AWWWWWWW!!! This was amazingly adorable and a great take on the prompt. I just love the way you write this pairing, with their loving relationship. I like the little touches about Jeff's obsessive cleanliness (the hand sanitizer, hee!) and the way he's kind of annoyingly demanding but still sweet. I can see why Chip finds him impossible to resist :)

I'm so glad you chose this prompt - I LOVED it!!!

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accordingtomel August 8 2011, 04:34:27 UTC
YAAAAAY! I'm so glad that you were pleased with what I did with your prompt!! I'm sorry that I didn't include any other pairings. To be honest, I'm a little scared to write for any other pairings just yet, but I think I'm going to try and force myself to some time in the near future.

Anyway, I am SO HAPPY that you liked the fic. I don't know what it is with me and the ridiculous fluff these days. I tend to lean towards angst all the time, so I have no idea where this constant barrage of fluff is coming from. Probably because they're both so damn adorable together, it's hard to write angsty things.Truthfully, I know very little about Dan either, but I've sort of invented a head!canon for him, since I've started including him in most of my Jeff/Chip fics. Glad you enjoyed the texts, as well as my interpretation of him. I had a lot of fun writing out those texts, to be honest ( ... )

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sheesusnat August 7 2011, 22:54:52 UTC
Lovely and wonderful, as always :)

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accordingtomel August 8 2011, 04:34:57 UTC
Yay, thanks so much! I'm very happy that you liked it :D

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woahxxrach August 8 2011, 02:13:36 UTC
This is one of my first times on this website. The only other times I've came on here were to read your other Jeff/Chip fics. They are all amazing, so when I saw you wrote another one I was ecstatic!

It was one of the most adorable things I've even read in my life. The way you have Chip and Jeff interact always makes me smile. I'll stop myself before I write a short novel on how much I love this pairing, but you are an amazing author. I can't wait until the next one.
:)

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accordingtomel August 8 2011, 04:36:48 UTC
Aww, what an incredibly kind compliment, thank you! I'm honoured that you came on LJ just to leave me a comment on my fic. That's like... amazing! So thank you so much!

Anyway, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this (and my other fics). I had a lot of fun writing it, so I'm pleased that it was able to put a smile on your face! But just so you know, I'll never complain about a short novel on how much you love Jeff/Chip, LOL!

Thanks so much for your sweet feedback! It's greatly appreciated :D

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rentluver07 August 8 2011, 03:32:37 UTC
Awww, this was super adorably sweet. I love the Dan references, and I had to laugh (even though I felt his pain) when Jeff was forced to watch Jersey Shore. Poor wee Jeffykins!

This reminded me of the episode of The Big Bang Theory when Sheldon gets sick. That episode made me lol, and this fic does the same. Kudos!

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accordingtomel August 8 2011, 04:39:30 UTC
Aww, thank you so much :D. I was sitting there trying to think of some show that would probably be torturous to Jeff, and Jersey Shore seemed like the obvious choice. I honestly can't imagine him enjoying it in any way, shape or form. Glad you got a kick out of it, LOL ;)

I haven't seen that episode of TBBT, but I can actually imagine Sheldon behaving similarly to Jeff (though with less tact and social skills, LOL!) I will take that as the compliment that you meant it to be and say a huge: THANK YOU to you for that! I'm so glad you liked the fic :D

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