fic: A Test of Faith (chp. 1)

[accordionchick]

I wrote this chunk of fic about a year ago, and my buddy broms_lullaby told me to put it here. I hope to revisit this fic soon, and any and all feedback will be very much welcome. (please please please review!!!)

Chapter one: the case
Nick was awoken out of his delightfully deep sleep by the sound of his pager going off on the bedside table. He was

Comments

[legsi003]

This is a really good start! I think the writing is very well done, and I must say I'm totally interested in the not-so-dead girl :P

If you get the time I think you should continue, it'll be interesting to see where this goes.

Great job :D <3

[yaoilover2200]

Love it!, can't wait to read more! ^_____^

Hoping to have my say

[anonymous]

Hey - I am definitely happy to discover this. cool job!