fic- a spoonful of sugar

[aceharlequin87]

title: a spoonful of sugar
author: LadyAceHarlequin
pairing: zoe/wash (expect this out of me)
rating: pg-15...chock a block full of bawdy thoughts and suggestive language (again...it's to be expected)
disclaimer: if these characters were mine, i wouldn't have to worry about paying for grad school. also that title up there--that's mary poppins.
notes:

Comments

[lvs2read]

Hee! Very cute! I love Wash being mesmerized by Zoe's words as much as her actions. *g*

Since you're new to LJ and asked for tips... Most of the fic comms ask that you put a header on your fic with title, rating, warnings, and a disclaimer. Pairings and author's name are good, too. Even when the fic is posted in a pairing comm. *shrugs* Just something to keep in mind for next time. And I do hope there'll be a next time. *g*

Welcome to the fandom!

thanks

[aceharlequin87]

gah! that's called "ace totally forgot about fanfic protocol" i do it from time to time. thanks for the feedback, and thanks for pointing that out.

Re: thanks

[lvs2read]

You're welcome, and no worries. We all forget things from time to time. Can't tell you how many times I've forgotten my disclaimer. *facepalm*

[sugar_fey]

Very, very cute! Chocolate really is the key to any relationship. And a nice description of Wash being mesmerised by Zoe. They're such an adorable couple.

[seldra]

Mmmm lovely fic!

[razycrandomgirl]

Um Very tasty. :)

[whichwitch666]

Chocolate, sugar, cream, sticky, sweet, center, sex, love, Zoe.

Cute, cute, cute! :)

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