More from my new story--Definitely good reading, I hope.

[acemikels]

Haven't quite gotten to the action parts, but hey, all stories are like that

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[redkoala11514]

Good. I like it. Keep it up. :)

...and now for some unknown reason, i have this strange mental image of a giant humanoid robot "raising the roof". :P

Raise the roof, bust the sides, stomp the floor...

[acemikels]

Well i try to have some of my humor mixed into an other-wise serious-toned story. Knowing how Davis is modelled after me, yeah, i'd raise the roof.