Hunters: Angel Song (Possible Ending)

[acemikels]

Since I'm posting most of my stuff here, I figured why the hell not? This is the supposed ending to the Angel Song story. Very brutal. I'm not so sure on the exact end. I don't like how it was just BAMN, but here it is.

Comments

[anduril_phoenix]

Poor Azazial. :(

Good story though.

[acemikels]

well it was meant to be a brutal morale blow to everyone, especially Ace. Although honestly, she got it easy. Kaen flat out brutally and harshly murders many of the Hunters and their new allies' parents. We're talking massive body part in little pieces...pretty sick and twisted. Also he kills Rufus and Kente in a pretty brutal manner.

Luckily i haven't written too much use of his power. He's got Ace's power, except he has to draw in power from others. Essentially Ace's powers aren't just him generating energy on his own. Ace actually gains energy by duplicating it from others. The more people with energy around him, the stronger he gets. Kaen works the opposite: he drains energy from people around him, including enemies.

Thanks for reading my stories! I'm working on more!

[anduril_phoenix]

I think some writing on the atrocities Kaen commits would be good for the story. It might help cement him as the "bad guy". Just my thoughts though.

And a bit off-topic, but here's one of my favorite websites for Ice and Fire. It's got spoilers in it, but it should be ok. Here you go, love.