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Feb 29, 2012 01:29

Title: Zydrate Anatomy
Author: achika_chan
Pairing: Spoony/Linkara
Rating: Pg-13
Summary: Lieutenant Spoony and his band of merry men are faced with the death of a patron of the shady Lotus Eaters night club.

Well that would explain all the drugs, if that place’s reputation is to be believed )

internal affairs, fic, tgwtg

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ocelot_l February 29 2012, 02:46:24 UTC
Yay, Snob, Jillian, and his posse have arrived! And Roses! I love them all! You're doing a great job fleshing out this world. :D

Insano and 80s Chick have a sweet friendship. I'm glad they can still remain close and not let Spoonette or anything come between them.

Plus Chester! He's always so sweet and happy, and of course he'd love dogs.

Lol, my favorite part was Linkara in clubbing clothes going dancing with Spoony. Too funny and hot. But date night at home with Oreo and pizza is always the best!

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achika_chan February 29 2012, 03:01:12 UTC
Yay, Snob, Jillian, and his posse have arrived!

FINALLY. I've had this story almost finished and have been posting snippits FOREVER. But now it's done and Snob and co are finally there!

And Roses! I love them all! You're doing a great job fleshing out this world. :D

Aww, thanks. Roses was actually a last minute addition, but I think it works.

Insano and 80s Chick have a sweet friendship. I'm glad they can still remain close and not let Spoonette or anything come between them.

I figured Insano needed some good friends in his life, and he and 80s Chick have known each other a long time, even if they weren't ever very close.

Plus Chester! He's always so sweet and happy, and of course he'd love dogs.

Yeah, Chester seems like the dog person type.

Lol, my favorite part was Linkara in clubbing clothes going dancing with Spoony. Too funny and hot.

Linkara wasn't very happy about it, but Spoony asked and it was to help catch a killer. Sacrifices of dignity had to be made.

But date night at home with Oreo and pizza is always the ( ... )

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ocelot_l February 29 2012, 06:18:20 UTC
Hurray for Snob and co! Although I am wondering if you're going to take into account recent events, or just ignore them and pretend they're all still friends. I guess it wouldn't really matter overall to most of your stories in this world, but I suppose if you needed someone from his group to get hurt/killed or something, you could pick based on what happened.

I hope we see more reviewers popping up here and there!

Yeah, Insano does need friends besides Spoony and Sol. I hope he and 80s Chick discover they have at least one hobby in common so they can hang out more.

I now hope more killers/criminals turn up that require Linkara to dress up in even more bizarre/sexy outfits, lol.

Oh yeah, that date night sounds perfect to me too! Pizza and a puppy? Sign me up! :D

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achika_chan February 29 2012, 06:37:39 UTC
Although I am wondering if you're going to take into account recent events, or just ignore them and pretend they're all still friends. I guess it wouldn't really matter overall to most of your stories in this world, but I suppose if you needed someone from his group to get hurt/killed or something, you could pick based on what happened.

I wrote this looooooooooooong before Jerrid got fired and I didn't bother changing it, but I imagine in the future he's not going to show up. Jake or Brian will be the new Right Hand Man.

I hope we see more reviewers popping up here and there!

I throw people in whenever I can think of a good role for them, so it'll probably happen eventually.

I hope he and 80s Chick discover they have at least one hobby in common so they can hang out more.

They'll definitely hang out more.

I now hope more killers/criminals turn up that require Linkara to dress up in even more bizarre/sexy outfits, lol."I AM NOT WEARING A DRESS!" "Not even to catch a serial rapist?" "NO! I AM THROUGH JOINING IN YOUR ( ... )

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never_found February 29 2012, 18:20:40 UTC
I loved the murder mystery and was trying to work it out myself (and failed XD).

Seems like you have a backstory for Lester considering he's scared of the police. Police brutality, perhaps?

Liked how you got parts of Linkara's review of Mr T comics from this week and the previous week into this fic.

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achika_chan February 29 2012, 18:34:31 UTC
I loved the murder mystery and was trying to work it out myself (and failed XD).

LOL that's actually because I'm really kind of shitty at writing mysteries.

Seems like you have a backstory for Lester considering he's scared of the police. Police brutality, perhaps?

Not all police are as nice to the Bums as Spoony.

Glad you liked it! :D

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m3rrys0ngstr3ss February 29 2012, 20:51:53 UTC
BUT BUT OAN AND INSANO ARE MEANT TO BE TOGETHER! (sorry, my shipping goggles are on tighter than normal :P )

Also, all the agreement with ocelot about pizza with the man and the dog being the best ending to a nasty case.

Well done :)

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achika_chan March 1 2012, 04:16:37 UTC
BUT BUT OAN AND INSANO ARE MEANT TO BE TOGETHER! (sorry, my shipping goggles are on tighter than normal :P )

Luckily 80s Chick isn't a threat to the Oan/Insano. :D

Also, all the agreement with ocelot about pizza with the man and the dog being the best ending to a nasty case.

Best date night.

Well done :)

Thanks! :D

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aunt_zelda February 29 2012, 23:18:24 UTC
This was no less than thirteen shades of awesome. I mean, there was just so much made of win!

80's Chick! Oreo! BRAD JONES AND JILLIAN OWN A SEXY SEXY SKETCHY CLUB AKLDALFJASLFJDALFJDLAFJLAFJDLAFJLAFJAL!!!!!!!! (AND SPOONY WENT THERE ONCE!!!!) CHESTER! Linkara and Spoony in sexy clothes and fake-fighting to cause a scene! A serial killer on the loose! The bad guy got caught! Reynolds! Fields suggesting a threesome! Disney-references! ZYDRATE!

Seriously, this was a great pick-me-up after a long, long, exhausting day. I've been running on fumes and it's probably only an adrenaline rush that's been keeping me going ...
*kerslumps*

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achika_chan March 1 2012, 04:20:52 UTC
This was no less than thirteen shades of awesome. I mean, there was just so much made of win!

Aw, thanks!

BRAD JONES AND JILLIAN OWN A SEXY SEXY SKETCHY CLUB AKLDALFJASLFJDALFJDLAFJLAFJDLAFJLAFJAL!!!!!!!!

Of course they do. I mean, what ELSE could they possibly do?

(AND SPOONY WENT THERE ONCE!!!!)

He did! But it gave him a headache and he doesn't really drink or do drugs so it left something to be desired.

Linkara and Spoony in sexy clothes and fake-fighting to cause a scene!

They've got to catch the bad guy's attention somehow.

Disney-references!

I just really like that song. :D

Seriously, this was a great pick-me-up after a long, long, exhausting day. I've been running on fumes and it's probably only an adrenaline rush that's been keeping me going ...
*kerslumps*

Aww, I'm glad the fic made you happy. Get some rest!

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