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achika_chan

WIP Amnesty part 3

Jun 24, 2012 16:37

These are some of the longer ones. Superhero AU and The Denny's Court will both be getting their own posts.

( The Bargain - Sage thinks he's the Devil, so he goes to an expert )

internal affairs, dark side of the city, fic, never to see daylight, girlkara, earth 982, outlines, a little more like a cult, tgwtg

Comments 17

alien_snipe June 24 2012, 20:57:33 UTC

There was a thud from the kitchen where 90s Kid was studying. Oreo barked at the sudden noise.

*SNRT* Oh 90's Kid, you scamp. XD

I wish I'd been able to make any more progress on that fic, but I stalled out at the outline phase myself. I feel guilty.

...I can tell you what I had planned for the climax, though, if you're curious.

achika_chan June 24 2012, 21:18:56 UTC

*SNRT* Oh 90's Kid, you scamp. XD

He was just caught off guard when he heard that Harvey has an 'In' to the BDSM club. I mean, that's a lot to process for him and really does not help his crush at all?

I wish I'd been able to make any more progress on that fic, but I stalled out at the outline phase myself. I feel guilty.

Don't feel guilty at all.

...I can tell you what I had planned for the climax, though, if you're curious.

Oh yes, do tell! :D

alien_snipe June 24 2012, 22:44:43 UTC

*cracks knuckles*

Well, at some point Linkara and Spoony actually need to participate in the goings-on at the Ankh, to prove to the patrons and staff that they're on the level. This is after they've had a couple of close calls. Mainly Linkara; Spoony's role is pretty simple in all this. Call Linkara "Master", follow along at his heel, bow his head and answer politely when Linkara calls him "boy", address other doms as "Sir" or "Ma'am" - easy stuff. To keep the charade going, Spoony agrees to cause a minor mishap and be taken by Linkara for punishment.

Linkara gets Spoony in the stocks in one of the playrooms and gives him a very thorough spanking. (Basically he gives the rack of implements a once-over and decides he has the best shot at using the paddle competently without causing Spoony grievous harm.) Spoony's OK with this because, pssht, of course he can take a paddling. He's MANLY.

But the spanking seems to go on and on, and every smack makes his toes curl a little tighter. And so many people are looking at him. They can see ( ... )

achika_chan June 24 2012, 23:17:10 UTC

To keep the charade going, Spoony agrees to cause a minor mishap and be taken by Linkara for punishment.

A perfectly logical thing to do *nods*

(Basically he gives the rack of implements a once-over and decides he has the best shot at using the paddle competently without causing Spoony grievous harm.)

It's true, some things would really hurt, especially since Linkara doesn't realyl know what he's doing.

Spoony's OK with this because, pssht, of course he can take a paddling. He's MANLY.

LOLOLOL oh Spoony.

And the spanking is starting to feel kind of warm and tingly now. And his head feels all floaty.

Of course.

Spoony is so distant and subdued that Linkara immediately assumes that he's been drugged. He quickly ushers Spoony to a quiet corner and tells him to stay,

LOLOLOL oh Linkara.

then heads off to find Tony.

And Tony would just laugh and laugh at him. "Oh kid, you're adorable. Your boy is just fine, go give him a hug or something and tell him he did good,"

But he's still a trained SWAT officer, subspace or no.Hell ( ... )

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ocelot_l June 24 2012, 21:06:09 UTC

Oh, the Internal Affairs stuff you had is still really good. I would like to hear what you or Alien_Snipe had planned even if you aren't able to write any more.

I do still love the snippets of Wayne and Spoonette, as sad as they are. Seeing them together in the other world waiting for Vyce was sweet in a heart-breaking way. Then in the one where Insano saw her as a centerfold I also felt so bad for both of them. If only their lives could work out so they'd both be happy.

Mmm, Detective Linkara is always great. I love detective stories. I see you also had more Linksano/Spoony stuff, which I hope someone explores some day. And aw, Spoony trying to be nice to Insano after learning about his job. That's so sweet of him.

achika_chan June 24 2012, 21:21:19 UTC

Oh, the Internal Affairs stuff you had is still really good. I would like to hear what you or Alien_Snipe had planned even if you aren't able to write any more.

It would have been a fun story. Unfortunately, what you see here is what you get with me version, I hadn't gotten any further, even planning wise. :/

I do still love the snippets of Wayne and Spoonette, as sad as they are.

I just really enjoy them.

Mmm, Detective Linkara is always great. I love detective stories.

Me too, they're fun.

And aw, Spoony trying to be nice to Insano after learning about his job. That's so sweet of him.

LOL he tries.

ocelot_l June 24 2012, 23:32:40 UTC

Oh, well, it was still fun to read this much. So thanks again for showing us that. :)

I really enjoyed all this. You have some great ideas here and I love how you've balanced sadness and sweetness and hotness in so many of your fics.

achika_chan June 24 2012, 23:56:27 UTC

I really enjoyed all this.

I'm glad. A lot of this stuff I've had sitting around forever, especially the Sage and ATG one. It was...one of the first fics I'd actually written for the fandom? But I was never quite happy with it so it never got posted until now.

You have some great ideas here and I love how you've balanced sadness and sweetness and hotness in so many of your fics.

Thanks. :D

Thread 8

yersi_fanel June 25 2012, 05:57:39 UTC

Oh lovely wips, the best part is that you have already showed me some of them, you are awesome bb.

achika_chan June 25 2012, 07:12:54 UTC

LOL it's true you've probably seen a lot of these!

ladydiskette June 26 2012, 06:29:29 UTC

I need to set up a time and organize all these WIPs you have achika_chan they are just so awesome to read.

My favorite is the one with Linkara and Spoony being assigned to get married for Kickassia's tourism, I just cracked up when Chick went into "wedding planner" mode. XD

achika_chan June 26 2012, 19:29:52 UTC

I need to set up a time and organize all these WIPs you have achika_chan they are just so awesome to read.

I'm glad you liked them.

My favorite is the one with Linkara and Spoony being assigned to get married for Kickassia's tourism

Yeah, that's one of the ones that I'm actually sorry will never be finished. But I could never really think of anything mroe to do with it than I'd already written.

I just cracked up when Chick went into "wedding planner" mode.

LOL, me too. I just figured that Palin!Chick was all domestic and happy on the outside, but she was still Chick underneath it. She was going to have a lot of fun torturing Linkara and Spoony.