Creative Writing

[achluomania]

So the first two days of school are over! Finally! And I got the two classes I wanted most, which are AP Psychology and Creative Writing. AND, as a bonus, both of those teachers are freakin' amazing and I think slightly insane.

So, my first assignment was to write a flash fiction piece including a waitress who likes her menus to rhyme as one of the

Comments

[zora01]

I think you got his grumpiness right. I got a feel of what was bothering him and how the waitress's cheeriness bothered him. You did a nice job in the story as a whole. =D

[achluomania]

Of course you didnt =D I love it when people are helpful. Most people just say "its good" or "it could be better" and it's so irritating because they don't say why they like it or why it could be better. I just want to smack 'em over the head and shout, "continue!"

Anyways, thanks for the help =D