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achooseylover

...Love... Part 7

Apr 21, 2010 23:31

-11:59 PM-

The limo ride home was as long and as sexually charged as the car ride home after that heated session with Jaejoong at the dance studio almost two months ago and it was getting harder to breathe with each passing moment. Everyone was laughing and talking, especially myself but it wasn’t because I was actually paying ( Read more... )

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dilovesyunjae April 22 2010, 07:00:52 UTC

yunnie!!!!! *sobs* poor, poor yunnie!!! Min was too harsh, much too harsh. poor leaderssi..

achooseylover April 23 2010, 04:43:07 UTC

Yes, Changmin's reaction was a bit much =( Hopefully in the next part, we will see a more level-headed Changmin <3 <3

kattan69 April 22 2010, 07:34:13 UTC

I'm surprised that Min is the one not taking it well as compared to Su. Luckily only one of them is against it....just hope Min will change his mind about our precious Yunjae...especially when Yunho is feeling so insecure...*sigh*

achooseylover April 23 2010, 04:45:21 UTC

Yes, Yunho is definitely feeling vulnerable at this point. He needs all the love from his friends at this point. T___T

minnie.... zain_2000 April 22 2010, 08:06:19 UTC

Sighh.....must be quite shocking to see your hyungs in bed together...but keep an open mind..love is beautiful and rare...hehehehehehe...thanks for writing such a gripping chapter...

cant wait for the next one.
zain

Re: minnie.... achooseylover April 23 2010, 04:46:47 UTC

I can only imagine what was going through Changmin's head when he found them like that! I don't want to give away too much, but you will have a little insight into what was going through his mind in the next part! ^___^

motubunu7 April 22 2010, 08:30:48 UTC

one of the best i've read so far.marvellous.impeccable and perfect.by far the most realistic i have read.it felt like as if i was there standing in the same room as them and looking at the whole scenario with my own eyes.beautiful yet heartbreaking.i was rooting for the ever religious and strict junsu to be the one that will get repelled by two men in love,the most.but i guess don't judge a book by its cover holds a good example for the situation.changmin is not entirely wrong but he was mean too.the last moment when yunho collapses on the floor was a break to the already broken yunjae heart of mine.in a much lighter note i gotta tell you that the smut session was quite hot.want more.plz update soon.chu~<3

achooseylover April 23 2010, 04:49:20 UTC

Thank you so much for the great comment! I'm really working hard, doing research and trying to put my mind into the characters to make them as real as possible. And you're right when you say you can't judge a book by it's cover! You just never know how others may react or what they really feel. Changmin was indeed a bit mean, and hopefully we can find out more in the next part!
Oh, and yes!!! The smutty was so yummy! XD <3 <3 Thank you so much for reading!

motubunu7 April 23 2010, 12:07:20 UTC

the pleasure is all mine,bb!lol.do u mind adding me,plz?thnx!

sandy2708 April 22 2010, 09:31:42 UTC

hi there,i m a new reader here,i just spot ur fic n what can i say.....its awesome n interesting so i went to finish everything in 1 day...although feeling bad for changmin but i really hope he'll understand love is blind!!!!N hope my yunjae here will face it once they choose to be together...more update???

achooseylover April 23 2010, 04:51:29 UTC

A new reader! YAY! And I'm so happy you're enjoying the fic so far! I find it interesting and almost refreshing that there is someone actually feeling bad for Changmin! When you think about it, he's suddenly alone, trying to cope with this fact while everyone just seems to accept YunJae almost immediately. The tables have somewhat turned and although Changmin was a bit harsh, it was quite a shock to him.

The new part is almost finished and I'll be posting it soon! I hope you enjoy!