One-Shot: Pray - Siwon x Heechul

[achooseylover]

WARNING!!!!!!: THIS FIC IS BLASPHEMOUS, DIRTY, SMUTTY AND JUST PLAIN WRONG... but oh so RIGHT. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!!!!!!!!!! If you get offended easily, just go back and don't even start reading this. I'm not kidding. NC-17, CURSING, HOLY REFERENCES...Yeah. Turn away now if you don't like the sound of all that...

But if you do... enjoy! ^__^

Comments

[aegyo_less]

Wow, I love your style of writing.
I really enjoyed that fiction.
It's a nice idea to intertwine Siwons thoughts/prayers between the paragraphs.
The whole smut was really well written.

Thanks for sharing <3

[achooseylover]

Awesome! =D Thank you so much and I'm glad you enjoyed it! XD

[sayyadina83]

Oh my...
That was fantastic, I like that Siwon was feeling really guilty but not annoyingly so. Told in the first person was kinda disorientating but totally works. *two thumbs up*

[achooseylover]

Thank You! =D I was thinking about writing this in Third Person, but I really wanted to convey Siwon's internal battle.

Thanks for reading!

[ink_river10]

JESUS. Literally.

Oh Siwon, GIVE IT UP. LOL

>>>shameless

This was really hot and really visual. I loved it - and I'm SO happy I'm not a Christian! AHAHAHA

[achooseylover]

YEAH! Christianity makes me LOL sometimes. XD

I'm glad you liked it though! And I agree: Siwon really needs to give it up. ;D

[heyy13]

This was hot. :o

Was this for something or are you randomly satifying the falen angel/religious kink of fangirls everywhere?

I love the juxtoposition of the holy (cue brainwashed homophobe) Siwon, with his real actions and how no matter how he looks at it he's gone completely above and beyond the most simple of sin. (using a rosary to controle someone? Classic.)

ANYWAYS the moral of this long rambling review is guh. Love. <3

[achooseylover]

This was actually inspired by pervving out with one of my best friends. LOL! The religious kink is definitely something I'm exploring now because it really is just so forbidden!

And yes, in this, Siwon is definitely just gone and totally immersed in Heechul, his sin and he tries to control it by using the rosary..but we all know it's pointless. XD

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the comments! I'm sort of contemplating making a sequel of some sort because I'm definitely not done with this religious angel! XD

[heyy13]

lol! Fair enough, i know that feeling. I used to have a friend that would write whatever we were perving out about in DBSK fandom at the time. ;D *can't write for anything herself*

Ah but i was refering to the irony of him trying to controle himself using the rosary, but then also physically controling heechul with it via wrapping it around his neck and pulling him up with it. :P

Ahh! That would be awsome. But you don't necessarily have to make it a sequal, can do another story that deals with some of the themes of this one in another way plus something else. Or hell continue this it was great. :D

[achooseylover]

Ooooh, I love DBSK! *points to YunJae icon* XD I started writing a chaptered fic about them, but my inspiration ran dry when they went on hiatus.. ;__;

And OOO, I love your interpretation of the rosary better!! XD *brewing more religious-king* muahaha!

[dimonyo_anghel]

i loved this! I guess the only thing i was curious about was how Siwon knew to stretch Heechul, when it was mentioned before that he never did this before...

[achooseylover]

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it! Also, to elaborate a little, When I wrote that part about Siwon 'prepping' Heechul, I kind of didn't mean for it to come out that way. I actually wanted to come out more as if he was hurting Heechul and sort of trying to make him feel the pain that Siwon felt as far as battling with himself and his religion. Of course though, Siwon, being the good Catholic boy he is, couldn't really hurt him completely, hence the introduction of the lube.

But also, keep in mind that this wouldn't be Siwon's first time thinking about Heechul in this way... so I'm sure he had it all planned out despite his inexperience. XD

[dimonyo_anghel]

Ah okay, I realized the dirt half of your reply, the second half got me thinking "ohhh that makes sense it's like Siwon was looking up porn or info on guyxguy sex even though he believed it's a sin!"

[achooseylover]

Yep! Exactly!! Which I'm sure he prayed for forgiveness after watching that too. XD muahahaha