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fic: Come In From The Cold (Heroes), part 3/5

Apr 18, 2009 05:54

Title: Come In From The Cold, Part 3/5
Author: acinogan
Characters: Elle, Sylar, baby Noah, Noah Bennet, probably more to follow
Word Count: 2879 this bit
Rating: PG-13 this part
Summary: AU from "The Eclipse, Part 2" - Elle is raising baby Noah on her own and Sylar drops by for a visit.
Spoilers/Warnings: general thru volume 3 "The Eclipse, Part 2"
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fic: heroes (come in from the cold)

Comments 17

ateenwriter May 27 2009, 01:54:59 UTC

Elle is a beast! In most fics with baby Noah Elle is either too cute and sweet with him or she is just totally detached but I love how you are balancing it all out! Can't wait for more XD

acinogan May 27 2009, 05:38:46 UTC

thanks very much! glad i am coming across believably :) next part already written, then one more part (still to be finished) after that...

p. s. i added you back! so you can actually go ahead and read part 4 if you don't want to wait till tomorrow :)

ateenwriter May 27 2009, 16:34:43 UTC

awesome! thx

eleblack May 27 2009, 18:49:36 UTC

GOSH I loved this chap. The kiss part is something amazing and the waiting for Elle's surprise made me so anxious... What will little Noah's power be? I'm so curious! Post again asap! <3

acinogan May 27 2009, 21:10:50 UTC

all will be revealed soon :) thanks for following this fic & your nice comments!

kristen_88 May 28 2009, 03:24:04 UTC

That was awesome!
I loved the way you made me think that sylar was just being nice to Noah when he was actually accelerating his powers. Well you didn't make this clear yet and now I'm soo curious.
I'm loving it. =)