Comments | acinogan: fic: Nothing Is Taking Me Down, Part 2/? (Heroes)

acinogan

fic: Nothing Is Taking Me Down, Part 2/? (Heroes)

Mar 09, 2009 16:55

Title: Nothing Is Taking Me Down, Part 2/?
Author: acinogan
Characters: Sylar, Elle, Luke, more later
Word Count: 1197 this bit
Rating: PG-13 (fer cussin) this part, almost certainly at least R later
Summary: Elle makes a guest appearance on Sylar's latest road trip to collect on a debt. Going more and more AU by the moment.
Spoilers/Warnings: Gen. ( Read more... )

fic: heroes (nothing is taking me down)

Comments 18

catyuy March 9 2009, 21:33:24 UTC

Ghostly plane Elle.
She must be very bored.

acinogan March 9 2009, 21:41:01 UTC

i think boredom is at least part of the reason she is bothering sylar with her plan at all. there's more, though, too.

havemy_heart March 9 2009, 21:33:56 UTC

I love that she has him on his toes and that she keeps making digs about not being alive anymore ;D I hope she does fuck with his dreams!

acinogan March 9 2009, 21:42:10 UTC

how could she not make digs? keep reading to find out... :)

faded_facade March 9 2009, 21:56:16 UTC

I love this chapter a lot. The Petrelli family motto? So true! And I can only imagine what kind of hellish dreams that Elle could create for him.

And psst, you should probably make a post over at sylarelle, so not only those of us on your flist can read the story. :D

acinogan March 9 2009, 21:59:14 UTC

thanks! wait and see...

you are so right. i put the other parts up over there and then i kept getting distracted before i could get this part up there :)

stainofmylove March 9 2009, 22:04:29 UTC

This totally rocks. Both Sylar and Elle are so in character it hurts. Especially, "It isn't all about you. I don't exist just for you." "You don't exist at all." Really awesome, you are mining some really awesome and interesting territory, and I can't wait for the next part. I hope Elle does appear in his dreams--I imagine Sylar's dreams are pretty screwed up in the first place, lol.

acinogan March 9 2009, 22:15:06 UTC

thanks! but i didn't mean to hurt you...

next part is written but not quite right yet, so not long to wait. this thing is writing itself and remind me to let you in on a certain bit of exegesis after all is said and done :) mysterious, i know, but ruinous to your enjoyment at this point.

everyone wants the dreams! :O

superkappa March 9 2009, 22:30:08 UTC

This chapter was wonderful thing to come home to after class :) I love how IC Ghost!Elle feels. And Sylar deserves a little torture after what he did to her.

acinogan March 10 2009, 02:47:55 UTC

thanks! i'm glad it's coming across as IC :) that's always good. yeah, i am letting elle annoy the crap out of him for a while cause i want it so bad.