fic: Nothing Is Taking Me Down, Part 3/? (Heroes)

[acinogan]

Title: Nothing Is Taking Me Down, Part 3/?
Author: acinogan
Characters: Sylar, Elle, Luke, more later
Word Count: 1420 this bit
Rating: PG-13 this part, R later
Summary: Elle makes a guest appearance on Sylar's latest road trip to collect on a debt. Going more and more AU by the moment.
Spoilers/Warnings: Gen. Volume 4 spoilers, up through "Exposed"

Comments

[faded_facade]

1) I love that you just had Sylar leave Luke.
2) I love the exchanges between Sylar and Elle.
3) Major points for a slight Art of War reference.

So anyway, my point is that I totally love this chapter.

[acinogan]

yay, list commenting!

1) luke would completely get in the way, so he got postponed.
2) this fic has like more dialogue, proportionally speaking, than i have ever written. so i am glad you like it.
3) very slight reference :)

thanks very much!

[stainofmylove]

I gotta tell you, I am having such an awesome time following this fic. Every single step you've taken has been unique and engaging and so in character. As pretentious as it may sound, it's kind of hard for me to read fics (especially longer ones) and not find some tiny choice or characterization I kinda disagree with, lol. But you totally see this pairing the same way I do and I seriously can't wait for it to continue. I cannot predict where this is ultimately going at all, and it is so refreshing.

And yes, please give me sexy, angsty, fucked up dreams, hee. Pretty please. With a cherry on top.

[acinogan]

*shmushes you*
*evil laugh*
*considers exchange of cherry for dreams*

[superkappa]

I loved this chapter. The dialogue was great, as always. And Sylar leaving Luke? Always good in my eyes.

[acinogan]

if only heroes would hire me to be the danko for their writer's room...today, luke gets left behind. tomorrow, the world!

thanks!

[havemy_heart]

Another fun chapter. I love everything about their exchanges. And ha! He pretty much just abadoned Luke for Elle :D

[acinogan]

thanks! yeah, he totally did :) it's my fic, i do what i want!

[force_oblique]

Hehe i love how sarcastic and cynical Elle is and their banter with Sylar is ftw! <3
Loving this more please!

[acinogan]

thanks very much! more coming soon :)