fic: Nothing Is Taking Me Down, Part 5/? (Heroes)

[acinogan]

Title: Nothing Is Taking Me Down, Part 5/?
Author: acinogan
Characters: Sylar, Elle, Peter, Angela, more later
Word Count: 1376 this bit
Rating: PG-13 this part, R later
Summary: Elle makes a guest appearance on Sylar's latest road trip to collect on a debt. Going more and more AU by the moment. This is the most AU part yet.
Spoilers/Warnings: Gen.

Comments

[stainofmylove]

Yes! So many nice what-ifs: Peter spilling about the IABD future and Elle as Rebel(?) ... can't wait to see how this all pans out.

[acinogan]

thanks! this part was certainly more plotty than thinky.

(no question mark, damn it, it's my AU)

how would you feel about a special flist-only "extended dreams alternate part 6"? wherein there is more smut? do you think my non-flist would be pissed off by that?

[stainofmylove]

As a member of your flist, I'd be fine with this, hahahahaha.

[acinogan]

hmmm. i will have to spend all night adding more porn in there...

[havemy_heart]

Poor Elle, hearing about a future son she'll never have :( I would say I'm sorry for Sylar, but it's his fault that won't come true anymore.

Although...I've been suspecting for a couple chapters now that Elle's not really dead, and that she's somehow astral projecting or something like that. You don't have to answer, I just wanted to throw that out there.

[acinogan]

i am a tiny bit sorry for sylar, i can admit it. but yeah, poor elle :(

you know what, she is dead. i'm committing to that answer. but thanks for throwing it out, and you are not the first :)

thanks for commenting! (how are those drabbles going for you?)

[superkappa]

An overwhelmed Elle broke eye contact with him by way of her disappearance. He felt emptier than he thought he should. He'd abandoned the hope for a family a while ago, only to have Angela taunt him briefly. And for about a day with Elle, he'd...

I love that part. The pain was palpable.

[acinogan]

thanks! i love that you used the word palpable about something i wrote, it makes me all tingly.

[stromatowerry]

oh Elle as Rebel! So I wasn't the only one thinking about this? Lol, okay, I know it's a wishful thinking but oh, it doesn't hurt so it' super okay ;P

and yeah, the pain when Peter told 'them' the story of the future, about Noah and all... it's... heartbreaking.

[acinogan]

thanks for commenting! yes, i started the fic with Elle as Rebel in mind and it only took like 6 parts to get there :)

when it comes to torturing characters: i deliver.

[faded_facade]

Oh poor Elle, she won't get to see that future. I do like the idea of Elle as Rebel and I loled at how awkward Sylar was with Peter in the beginning.

Totally waiting for Elle messing with Sylar's dreams! :-p

[acinogan]

yeah, i know, poor elle! i will see what i can do to make it up to her later. like...getting to eff with sylar in his dreams! that should help.

yeah, sylar got a bit awkward there :) he was trying to bond with peter or something.