Fic: Spirals - Part 4

Dec 10, 2009 20:09

Title: Spirals - Part 4
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up to and including 'Secret Santa'
Summary: Cal is ready to move things forward, but Gillian isn't so sure.

Thanks to beatlejessie for her beta and for poking me with ideas when I got stuck! And alainnrois for picking up those little things we miss. Any errors left are mine and mine alone!

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3

Responsible? Really? )

spirals, fanfic

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yazizzle33 December 11 2009, 06:08:10 UTC
I'm so glad I took a "break" from studying for my final to check my LJ because I got to read this! *yay* Seriously, you've got Cal's voice and manner of speaking down soooo perfectly! I'm in awe of it! AND I love where this story is heading. I'm happy for sure. :D Oh and the last 3 lines totally had me LOL'ing. :D He would SOO do that!

Now back to the studying. :((

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acolyte33 December 12 2009, 03:47:35 UTC
Thank you! Hope the final went ok!!

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yazizzle33 December 12 2009, 07:01:24 UTC
It was horrible, but that is beside the point. :(

I love your new header! &hearts

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nonnaminerva December 11 2009, 08:43:00 UTC
Wow! I love Cal trying to be responsible but then he was actually faking it! And Gillian knowing that all along and not doing anything to stop him! Ahah!

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acolyte33 December 12 2009, 03:49:39 UTC
He can do it if he wants, but it doesn't mean he's going to like it!

Thanks :)

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callianshipper December 11 2009, 09:46:47 UTC
"Oh, by the way- the Goldstein file? Not really updated"

That part really made me laugh. I love this story and was so hyped to see part four up :)

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acolyte33 December 12 2009, 03:55:24 UTC
Thank you :D

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syldefish December 11 2009, 15:41:45 UTC
This is so good, i don't know what to say...they are sooo cute together. i really hope you update the next part soon.

(:

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acolyte33 December 12 2009, 03:56:14 UTC
Thank you :)

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ljmleo918251 December 11 2009, 18:08:22 UTC
Another great chapter. Cal just had me laughing during this one. Trying to be Gill's ideal man was really driving him nuts. And Gill knowing what he was up to and realizing that she missed Cal being Cal. Too funny. I can't wait for more. Thanks so much!

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acolyte33 December 12 2009, 03:58:19 UTC
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad it's not just me he amuses :)

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